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Tom Warren ea924158df Assorted text changes and consistency issues 2016-04-04 14:22:32 -04:00
Tom Warren 843db621cd Assorted changes through chapter 7
Checking sentences restructured without semicolons.
Rewording some, according to Grk, or to greater readability.
2016-04-04 13:50:10 -04:00
Tom Warren ce1793dd8a Update 21.usfm 2016-04-04 12:15:02 -04:00
Henry Whitney 230e4007ba fixed typos in v. 2
But my master king, do they not all serve my master.
to
But my master the king, do they not all serve my master?
2016-04-04 12:05:19 -04:00
lrsallee 275986241b Added missing question mark v3
Question mark was missing at end of final rhetorical question in verse 3.
2016-04-04 11:35:15 -04:00
Tom Warren 18b5bffea0 Edits for consistency
from readers notes
2016-04-04 11:05:09 -04:00
Tom Warren 6f5aae8952 Chapter 4 edits
Poetry made lc at indent.
Other changes throughout.
2016-04-04 11:01:35 -04:00
pohlig 5e3a728ddf Update 11.usfm 2016-04-04 10:59:26 -04:00
pohlig d4e0c459c5 Update 31.usfm 2016-04-04 10:58:27 -04:00
Tom Warren 6ad335b020 Small edits 2016-04-04 10:56:24 -04:00
Tom Warren 0dae98df69 Chapter 1 Edits for consistency
consistency
2016-04-04 10:53:46 -04:00
Tom Warren e7ac5530e8 Vs 1 Review 2016-04-04 09:22:33 -04:00
Tom Warren ca48b3899e 2 Thess 2:2 reworking
Issues on systax
2016-04-04 08:58:33 -04:00
Henry Whitney a4e1d179c1 added space after comma in v 19
as my master can see,but the water is bad
to
as my master can see, but the water is bad
2016-04-04 08:53:49 -04:00
Tom Warren 2ec9b35cf0 2 Thess 2:2
Clarifying syntax of the sentence.
2016-04-04 08:49:48 -04:00
Tom Warren 4e9c54b0a0 Vs 1 shifted main clause
Main clause was moved to beginning of the sentence.
2016-04-04 08:20:59 -04:00
Tom Warren f326f7f744 Vs 4, removed double "and" 2016-04-04 08:16:36 -04:00
Tom Warren 7c343880ad Vs 13 Revisions from Gk text. 2016-04-04 08:15:48 -04:00
Tom Warren 02da5d7470 Revised text Vs 18
Gk text was "previously made concerning you."
2016-04-04 08:11:23 -04:00
Tom Warren 9aed89e81b Edit phrase
Vs 19, blood of Jesus rather than "Jesus' blood" for simplicity for the MTT
2016-04-04 07:38:14 -04:00
pohlig f820450a89 Update 14.usfm 2016-04-03 17:08:10 -04:00
pohlig 2864748131 Update 05.usfm 2016-04-03 17:02:24 -04:00
pohlig 3f3e25869f Update 05.usfm 2016-04-03 10:45:56 -04:00
pohlig d6ab3eea23 Update 01.usfm 2016-04-03 10:37:58 -04:00
Henry Whitney 238f34da81 Update 02.usfm 2016-04-02 12:50:14 -04:00
Richard Mahn ffdff90c68 Reverted file back 2016-04-01 15:21:43 -06:00
Richard Mahn d47ae1bd38 Update 01.usfm 2016-04-01 15:19:20 -06:00
Richard Mahn 730a56d999 Initial commit from Etherpad 2016-04-01 21:07:38 +00:00