en_tn/jer/51/54.md

A shout of distress came from Babylon, a great collapse from the land of the Chaldeans

The same thought is expressed in two different ways for emphasis. (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism)

enemies roar like the waves of many waters

The sound of the enemies coming will be very loud. (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile)

her warriors have been captured

This phrase can be changed to have an active verb. AT: "they captured her warriors." (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)