7c989ca168
V24 rewrite
2016-05-26 10:34:52 -04:00
Tom Warren
c39abb9852
Clothes we will wear
2016-05-26 10:34:25 -04:00
Tom Warren
5b7eb91bd5
more valuable
2016-05-26 10:31:42 -04:00
Tom Warren
0e52207200
punctuation
2016-05-26 10:29:27 -04:00
Tom Warren
159a38dceb
consume
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to "destroy"
2016-05-26 10:26:36 -04:00
96059c55a6
Changed period to an exclamation mark in v. 9
2016-05-29 09:24:08 -05:00
7373f6383a
changed a period to an exclamation mark
2016-05-29 09:24:08 -05:00
Tom Warren
ea4de1c307
private to secret
2016-05-26 10:21:42 -04:00
Tom Warren
12b6b193ca
Closer to the Greek
2016-05-26 10:19:03 -04:00
Tom Warren
4c88befe53
Straightened out Lord's Prayer
2016-05-26 10:14:42 -04:00
Tom Warren
f2f071ac60
Vs 4, 6
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recompense changed to "reward"
2016-05-26 10:11:38 -04:00
Tom Warren
94bb3d1e30
Condition
2016-05-26 10:09:17 -04:00
Tom Warren
e6823e56e2
Various tweeks
2016-05-26 09:59:31 -04:00
Tom Warren
a15df6137a
Various edits
2016-05-26 09:45:07 -04:00
5683d633d5
added "From" to v. 1; and in v. 3 removed the comma after "us,"
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"From" helps explain the "to" of this letter:
From ____, To ____
Comma seems to not be needed; unnecessarily interrupts the flow of the
first clause
2016-05-29 08:28:13 -05:00
Tom Warren
7315a37291
Sabbath
2016-05-26 09:03:01 -04:00
Tom Warren
d7caa84be7
Sabbath
2016-05-26 09:01:01 -04:00
Tom Warren
0941298eda
oxen and fattened ...
2016-05-26 08:27:39 -04:00
Tom Warren
4ba4abafb9
Reworked 22:1
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Redundant introduction of narrative is simplified.
2016-05-26 08:21:27 -04:00
Tom Warren
cfebe926b6
21:43
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removed unnecessary UC"The...", replaced with "the ...
2016-05-26 08:16:16 -04:00
Tom Warren
0ca912c6f3
Period at end of 14:3
2016-05-26 08:10:10 -04:00
2148f5d075
Update 06.usfm
2016-05-25 18:16:31 -04:00
0047112219
Update 06.usfm
2016-05-25 17:41:03 -04:00
64faccc712
Update 06.usfm
2016-05-25 17:38:43 -04:00
ceb4651890
V18-23 rewrite
2016-05-25 17:24:06 -04:00
f8ec9fc3b6
Update 06.usfm
2016-05-25 16:14:19 -04:00
651400d74c
Hebrews 5:6 colon to comma
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Hebrews 5:6 colon to comma
2016-05-25 16:02:53 -04:00
f8d1735d95
Update 06.usfm
2016-05-25 16:02:24 -04:00
4c6ea0134e
Hebrews 5:5 semi-colon to comma
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Hebrews 5:5 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 16:00:45 -04:00
27f2320770
V15, 16 rewrite
2016-05-25 15:59:18 -04:00
07e826e8c3
Hebrews 4:3 change colon to comma
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Hebrews 4:3 change colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:58:34 -04:00
ba93b9e61e
Hebrews 3:10-11 second level quote change
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Hebrews 3:10-11 second level quote change from the end of verse 11 to the end of verse 10
2016-05-25 15:57:27 -04:00
a16ae4099f
Hebrews 3:7 change punctuation
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Hebrews 3:7 change punctuation
2016-05-25 15:51:59 -04:00
1adcde5b78
Hebrews 2:16 change punctuation
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Hebrews 2:16 change punctuation
2016-05-25 15:49:20 -04:00
94090499a7
Hebrews 2:12 change punctuation
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Hebrews 2:12 change punctuation
2016-05-25 15:47:40 -04:00
1893e1cebc
Hebrews 2:2-3 change sentence structure
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Hebrews 2:2-3 change sentence structure to make conditional clause (verse 2) precede naturally the main one.
2016-05-25 15:45:20 -04:00
a9b86cdda7
Update 06.usfm
2016-05-25 15:42:27 -04:00
8725d6a9a8
Update 06.usfm
2016-05-25 15:38:37 -04:00
f18a4f0a99
Hebrews 1:14 change wording
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Hebrews 1:14 changed "sent out to worship me and to care" to "sent out to minister and to care" since the pronoun "me" is not in the Greek and confusingly refers to God IF he is still the speaker in verse 14 but the quotation marks indicate that now the writer is speaking.
2016-05-25 15:20:57 -04:00
9461dbc12f
Rewrite V13, 15
2016-05-25 15:15:55 -04:00
7ac6831325
Hebrews 1:10 semi-colon to period and new sentence
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Hebrews 1:10 semi-colon to period and new sentence
2016-05-25 15:14:59 -04:00
59e7640236
Hebrews 1:9 semi-colon to comma
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Hebrews 1:9 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:13:38 -04:00
5f0e04da34
Hebrews 1:8 semi-colon to period and new sentence
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Hebrews 1:8 semi-colon to period and new sentence
2016-05-25 15:12:27 -04:00
b219692814
Hebrews 1:5 semi-colon to comma
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Hebrews 1:5 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:11:17 -04:00
cea9da7045
V8, 9 rewrite
2016-05-25 14:46:52 -04:00
97a5260ffa
Hebrews 12:8 cut redundant word "children"
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Hebrews 12:8 cut redundant word "children"
2016-05-25 14:43:19 -04:00
70f3d56c7f
Hebrews 11:19 change wording
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Hebrews 11:19 change wording to smooth it out and connect "from the dead" closer to Abraham's "receiving him back.
2016-05-25 14:40:54 -04:00
c75401e950
Hebrews 6:3 change wording number
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Hebrews 6:3 change wording number from plural to singular "these things" to "this"
2016-05-25 14:29:25 -04:00
9bc5cb01bd
James 1:17 change wording
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James 1:17 change "He does not change like shifting shadows." to what you see because he does not change AT ALL.
2016-05-25 14:18:23 -04:00
811d6165c5
James 1:8 removed redundant "person"
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James 1:8 removed redundant "person" after "double-minded" and "a" from before "double-minded"
2016-05-25 14:08:23 -04:00
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