en_tn_condensed/rev/19/04.md

twenty-four elders

"24 elders." See how you translated this in Revelation 4:4. (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-numbers)

the four living creatures

"the four living beings" or "the four living things." See how you translated this in Revelation 4:6

who was seated on the throne

This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "who sat on the throne" (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive)