en_tn_condensed/lev/07/15.md

The person presenting

"The person who offers"

for the purpose of giving thanks

The abstract noun "thanks" can be stated as a verb. Alternate translation: "for the purpose of thanking Yahweh" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns)

the meat must be eaten ... it may be eaten

This can be translated in active form. Alternate translation: "he must eat the meat ... he may eat it" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)