en_tn_condensed/num/15/13.md

made by fire

This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "that they burn on the altar" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)

to produce an aroma that is pleasing to Yahweh

"to produce a smell that pleases Yahweh." Yahweh being pleased with the sincere worshiper who offers the sacrifice is spoken of as if Yahweh were pleased with the aroma of the sacrifice. Alternate translation: "to please Yahweh by offering it" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor)