en_tn_condensed/psa/141/005.md

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hit me

The psalmist speaks as if giving a rebuke were physically hitting someone. AT: "rebuke me" or "hit me so I will listen when he corrects me" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor)

it will be a kindness to me

The abstract noun "kindness" can be translated with an adverb. AT: "he will be acting kindly to me" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns)

it will be like oil on my head

Possible meanings are that the psalmist speaks as if a person correcting him were putting oil on his head 1) to honor him. AT: "when he corrects me, I will know that the one who corrects me is doing a good deed to me" or 2) to make his head feel better. (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile and rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor)

may my head not refuse to accept it

The head is a synecdoche for the person. The litotes can be translated as a positive statement. AT: "may I accept it gladly" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche and rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-litotes)

my prayer is always against their wicked deeds

The words "wicked deeds" are a metonym for the people who do the wicked deeds. AT: "I always pray that Yahweh will stop wicked people from doing evil deeds" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy)

Their leaders will be thrown down

Possible meanings are 1) "Someone will throw their leaders down" or 2) "Their leaders will throw them down." (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)

cliffs

ground that goes straight down a long way

our bones have been scattered

Possible meanings are 1) "people have thrown our bones around in different directions" or 2) as a result of the fall from the cliffs (141:6) "our bodies are broken and our bones lie in disorder."

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