who is promised to a husband

This can be translated in active form. AT: "who is engaged to marry another man" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)

but who has not been ransomed or given her freedom

This can be translated in active form. AT: "but whom her future husband has not ransomed or given her freedom" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)

This can be translated in active form. AT: "you must punish the slave girl and the man who slept with her" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)

This can be translated in active form. AT: "You must not kill them" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)

"A man must bring a ram as a guilt offering to Yahweh to the entrance of the tent of meeting"

This can be translated in active form. AT: "Yahweh will forgive the sin which he has committed" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)