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# When the king's order and decree were proclaimed
This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "After the king commanded that they search for some beautiful women" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]])
"After the king commanded that they search for some beautiful women"
# proclaimed
"announced"
# many young women were brought
This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "they brought many young women" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]])
# They were put under Hegai's care
This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Hegai began to take care of them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]])
"Hegai began to take care of them"
# Esther also was taken into the king's palace and put under the care of Hegai, the overseer of the women
This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Hegai, the overseer of the women, also began to take care of Esther when they brought her to the king's palace" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]])
"Hegai, the overseer of the women, also began to take care of Esther when they brought her to the king's palace"
# palace
See how you translated this in [Esther 1:5](../01/05.md).
See how you translated this in Esther 1:5.