diff --git a/est/02/08.md b/est/02/08.md index 51cd2191ed..ebb473a2ef 100644 --- a/est/02/08.md +++ b/est/02/08.md @@ -1,24 +1,20 @@ # When the king's order and decree were proclaimed -This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "After the king commanded that they search for some beautiful women" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) +"After the king commanded that they search for some beautiful women" # proclaimed "announced" -# many young women were brought - -This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "they brought many young women" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) - # They were put under Hegai's care -This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Hegai began to take care of them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) +"Hegai began to take care of them" # Esther also was taken into the king's palace and put under the care of Hegai, the overseer of the women -This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Hegai, the overseer of the women, also began to take care of Esther when they brought her to the king's palace" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) +"Hegai, the overseer of the women, also began to take care of Esther when they brought her to the king's palace" # palace -See how you translated this in [Esther 1:5](../01/05.md). +See how you translated this in Esther 1:5.