803 B
803 B
the second seal
"the next seal" or "seal number two" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal)
the second living creature
"the next living creature" or "living creature number two" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal)
came out—fiery red
This can the stated as a second sentence. AT: "came out. It was red like fire" or "came out. It was bright red"
To its rider was given permission
This can be stated with an active verb. AT: "God gave permission to its rider" or "Its rider received person" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)
This rider was given a huge sword
This can be stated with an active verb. AT: "This rider received a huge sword" or "God gave this rider a huge sword" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)