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1.3 KiB
twenty-four elders
"24 elders." See how you translated this in Revelation 4:4. (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers)
fell upon their faces
This is an idiom that means they lay down facing the ground. See how you translated "prostrated themselves" in Revelation 4:10. AT: "they bowed down" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom)
you, Lord God Almighty, the one who is and who was
These phrases can be stated as sentences. AT: "you, Lord God, the ruler over all. You are the one who is, and you are the one who was" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-distinguish)
the one who is
"the one who exists" or "the one who lives"
who was
"who has always existed" or "who has always lived"
you have taken your great power
What God did with his great power can be stated clearly. AT: "you have defeated with your power everyone who has rebelled against you" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit)