en_tn/lev/04/34.md

the horns of the altar

See how you translated this in Leviticus 4:6.

just as the fat of the lamb is cut away

AT: "just as he cut away the fat of the lamb" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)

offerings of Yahweh made by fire

AT: "burnt offerings for Yahweh"

the man will be forgiven

AT: "God will forgive the man's sins"