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457 B
the thirteenth day of the month of Adar
See how you translated a similar phrase in Esther 3:13.
On the fourteenth day they rested
"On the fourteenth day of Adar the Jews who were in the provinces rested"
the Jews who were in Susa assembled together
Why they assembled together can be stated clearly. AT: "the Jews who were in Susa assembled together to fight against their enemies" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit)