en_tn/exo/33/09.md

the pillar of cloud

The cloud had the shape of a pillar. See how you translated this in Exodus 13:22. Alternate translation: "the cloud shaped like a pillar" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor)

would come down

Where it came down from can be stated clearly. Alternate translation: "would come down from the sky" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit)