Fixed single-word snippets.

pro/12/11.md

@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-# projects
+# worthless projects
 
-"plans" or "tasks"
+"worthless plans" or "worthless tasks"
 
-# fruit
+# the fruit
 
 This refers to a person's actions and thoughts. Just as fruit on a tree shows what kind of tree it is, in the same way a person's words and actions reveal what his character is like.
 

pro/13/17.md

@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 
 "is unreliable" or "does something evil"
 
-# envoy
+# a faithful envoy
 
-"messenger" or "diplomat"
+"a faithful messenger" or "a faithful diplomat"
 
 # learns from correction
 

pro/14/01.md

@@ -18,9 +18,9 @@ The woman is represented by her "hands." AT: "by herself" or "by the way she beh
 
 "Walks" represents the conduct of life. AT: "conducts his life in a just and honest way" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
-# despises
+# despises him
 
-"grossly disrespects" or "indicates he hates"
+"grossly disrespects him" or "shows that he hates him"
 
 # in his ways despises him
 

pro/14/09.md

@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@
 
 This can be stated in active form. AT: "but the upright enjoy favor together" or "but God's favor is experienced together among the upright" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
-# bitterness
+# its own bitterness
 
-"sorrow" or "sadness"
+"its own sorrow" or "its own sadness"
 
 # no stranger
 

pro/14/34.md

@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 
 "brings shame upon to any people" or "should cause any people to be ashamed"
 
-# prudently
+# who acts prudently
 
-wisely, in a way that avoids having bad things happen
+"who acts wisely" or "who makes sure bad things do not happen"
 
 # the one who
 

pro/15/05.md

@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 
 The word "correction" can be translated as a verb. AT: "he who learns when someone corrects him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]])
 
-# prudent
+# is prudent
 
-"wise"
+"is wise"
 
 # the earnings of the wicked person give
 

pro/15/15.md

@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ Here the word "heart" represents the person. The writer speaks of a cheerful per
 
 "a feast that never ends"
 
-# confusion
+# with confusion
 
-"anxiety"
+"with anxiety"
 
 # translationWords
 

pro/16/07.md

@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@
 
 "earning a lot of money"
 
-# injustice
+# with injustice
 
-"wrongdoing"
+"with wrongdoing"
 
 # translationWords
 

pro/17/03.md

@@ -10,10 +10,6 @@ a pot in which metals are melted at a very high temperature
 
 This speaks of Yahweh testing people to help them stop being evil and foolish as if their hearts were a metal that Yahweh was refining to remove everything that is impure. AT: "Yahweh tests peoples' hearts" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
-# hearts
-
-"Hearts" represent a person's thoughts and desires. AT: "people's thoughts and desires" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
-
 # wicked lips
 
 The word "lips" can be translated as either 1) a synecdoche for the person or 2) a metonym for the words that come out from those lips. AT: "a wicked person" or "wicked talk" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])

pro/17/09.md

@@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
-# offense
+# an offense
 
-something that hurts or angers a person
+an action or word that has hurt him
 
 # who repeats a matter
 
 This refers to bringing up a past situation in which a friend was hurt or offended. AT: "who repeats a past offense" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
-# alienates
+# alienates close friends
 
-"separates"
+"causes people to stop being close friends" or "causes close friends to stop liking each other"
 
 # A rebuke goes deeper into a person ... than a hundred blows go into a fool
 

pro/20/03.md

@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ This speaks of entering an argument quickly as if the argument were something th
 
 to prepare land for planting
 
-# autumn
+# in autumn
 
-"the planting season"
+"during the season for planting crops"
 
 # but will have nothing
 

pro/20/05.md

@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ This speaks of how difficult it is to understand the reasons for a person's acti
 
 This speaks of figuring out the purpose of the human heart as if it was water being drawn from a deep well. AT: "will cause the purpose to be known" or "will figure it out" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
-# loyal
+# is loyal
 
-"faithful" or "trustworthy"
+"is faithful" or "is trustworthy"
 
 # but who can find one who is faithful?
 

pro/21/11.md

@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 
 This can be translated in active form. AT: "When someone punishes the mocker" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
-# naive
+# the naive
 
-inexperienced or immature
+"those who have no experience" or "those who are not mature"
 
 # the mocker
 
@@ -22,9 +22,9 @@ Here knowledge is spoken of as if it were an object that someone could grasp and
 
 Possible meanings are 1) any righteous person or 2) "Yahweh the one who is righteous."
 
-# watches
+# watches the house
 
-"pays careful attention to"
+"pays careful attention to the house" "looks to see what happens to the house"
 
 # he brings wicked people to disaster
 

pro/22/11.md

@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 
 It is his own heart that the person wants to be pure. The heart is a synecdoche for the person. AT: "loves having a pure heart" or "wants to be pure" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]])
 
-# gracious
+# is gracious
 
-"kind"
+"is kind"
 
 # The eyes of Yahweh keep watch over
 
@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@ The eyes are a synecdoche for the person. The writer speaks as if Yahweh had phy
 
 Keeping watch is s metonym for protecting. AT: "protect knowledge" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
-# overthrows
+# he overthrows
 
-"destroys"
+"he destroys"
 
 # the treacherous
 

pro/24/05.md

@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@ The abstract nouns "knowledge" and "strength" can be translated as the verb "kno
 
 The abstract noun "direction" can be translated as a verb. AT: "if you have wise people telling you what to do" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]])
 
-# wage
+# wage your war
 
-"fight"
+"fight your war"
 
 # advisors