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@ -46,11 +46,11 @@ If your language uses parallelism in the same way as the biblical languages, tha
* **Yahweh <u>sees</u> <u>everything a person does</u> and <u>watches</u> <u>all the paths he takes</u>.** (Proverbs 5:21 ULB) - The word "watches" us a synonym for "sees," and the phrase "all the paths he takes" is a metaphor for "all he does."
* Yahweh <u>pays attention</u> to <u>everything a person does</u>.
* **For Yahweh has a <u>lawsuit with his people</u>, and he will fight in court against Israel.** (Micah 6:2 ULB) - This parallelism describes one serious disagreement that Yahweh had with one group of people. If this is unclear, the phrases can be combined:
* For Yahweh has a <u>lawsuit with his people</u>, Israel.
* For Yahweh has a <u>lawsuit with his people</u>, Israel.
1. If it appears that the clauses are used together to show that what they say is really true, you could include words that emphasize the truth such as "truly" or "certainly."
* **Yahweh <u>sees everything</u> a person does and watches all the paths he takes.** (Proverbs 5:21 ULB)
* Yahweh <u>truly sees everything</u> a person does.
* Yahweh <u>truly sees everything</u> a person does.
1. If it appears that the clauses are used together to intensify an idea in them, you could use words like "very," "completely" or "all."
* **... you have deceived me <u>and</u> told me lies.** (Judges 16:13 ULB)