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@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ If the information given at the beginning of a new event is clear and natural to
1. If the introduction is a summary of the whole event, use your language's way of showing that it is a summary.
* **<sup>6</sup> Noah was six hundred years old when the flood came upon the earth. <sup>7</sup> Noah, his sons, his wife, and his sons' wives went into the ark together because of the waters of the flood.** (Genesis 7:6 ULB)
* <sup>7</sup><u>Now this is what happened when</u> Noah was six hundred years old and the flood came upon the earth. <sup>7</sup>Noah, his sons, his wife, and his sons' wives went into the ark together because of the waters of the flood.
* <sup>6</sup> <u>Now this is what happened when</u> Noah was six hundred years old and the flood came upon the earth. <sup>7</sup> Noah, his sons, his wife, and his sons' wives went into the ark together because of the waters of the flood.
* <sup>6</sup> <u>This part tells about what happened</u> when Noah was six hundred years old and the flood came upon the earth. <sup>7</sup> Noah, his sons, his wife, and his sons' wives went into the ark together because of the waters of the flood.
1. If it would be strange in the target language to give a summary of the event at the beginning, show that the event would actually happen later in the story.