From 31cf812af5e5509047696cb1ceb4ea4bc79f53ae Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Susan Quigley Date: Fri, 15 Feb 2019 16:40:39 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Update 'jit/translate-bvolume/01.md' --- jit/translate-bvolume/01.md | 35 +++++++++++++++++++---------------- 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) diff --git a/jit/translate-bvolume/01.md b/jit/translate-bvolume/01.md index 2c833ea..7d38de3 100644 --- a/jit/translate-bvolume/01.md +++ b/jit/translate-bvolume/01.md @@ -26,9 +26,17 @@ The following terms are the most common units of volume used in the Bible to sta * If you do not use the Biblical measures, try not to give the readers the idea that the measurements are exact. For example, if you translate one hin as "3.7 liters," readers might think that the measurement is exactly 3.7 liters, not 3.6 or 3.8. It would be better to use a more approximate measure such as "three and a half liters" or "four liters." * When God tells people how much of something to use, and when people use those amounts in obedience to him, do not say "about" in the translation. Otherwise it will give the impression that God did not care exactly how much they used. -### When the unit of measure is stated +### Examples from the Bible -#### Translation Strategies +**Sometimes the unit of measure is stated explicitly.** + +>For a ten-yoke vineyard will yield only one bath, and one homer of seed will yield only an ephah. (Isaiah 5:10 ULB) + +**Sometimes the Hebrew does not specify a particular unit of volume but only uses a number. In these cases, many English versions, including the ULB and UDB, add the word "measure."** + +> When you came to a heap of twenty measures of grain, there were only ten; and when you came to the wine vat to draw out fifty measures, there were only twenty. (Haggai 2:16 ULB) + +### Translation Strategies For When the Unit of Measure is Stated Explicitly 1. Use the measurements from the ULB. These are the same kinds of measurements that the original writers used. Spell them in a way that is similar to the way they sound or are spelled in the ULB. (see [Borrow Words](../translate-transliterate/01.md)) 1. Use the metric measurements given in the UDB. The translators of the UDB have already figured how to represent the amounts in the metric system. @@ -36,7 +44,7 @@ The following terms are the most common units of volume used in the Bible to sta 1. Use the measurements from the ULB and include measurements that your people know in the text or a note. 1. Use measurements that your people know, and include the measurements from the ULB in the text or in a note. -#### Examples of Translation Strategies Applied +### Examples of Translation Strategies Applied The strategies are all applied to Isaiah 5:10 below. @@ -46,8 +54,8 @@ The strategies are all applied to Isaiah 5:10 below. * "For a ten-yoke vineyard will yield only one bat, and one homer of seed will yield only an efa." 1. Use the measurements given in the UDB. Usually they are metric measurements. The translators of the UDB have already figured how to represent the amounts in the metric system. - * "For a ten-yoke vineyard will yield only twenty-two liters, and ten baskets of seed will yield only one basket." - * "For a ten-yoke vineyard will yield only twenty-two liters and 220 liters of seed will yield only twenty-two liters." + + * "For a ten-yoke vineyard will yield only twenty-two liters and 220 liters of seed will yield only twenty-two liters." 1. Use measurements that are already used in your language. In order to do this you would need to know how your measurements relate to the metric system and figure out each measurement. * "For a ten-yoke vineyard will yield only six gallons, and six and a half bushels of seed will yield only twenty quarts." @@ -57,25 +65,20 @@ The strategies are all applied to Isaiah 5:10 below. 1. Use measurements that your people know, and include the measurements from the ULB in the text or in a note. The following shows the ULB measurements in footnotes. * "For a ten-yoke vineyard will yield only twenty-two liters,[1]and 220 liters[2]of seed will yield only twenty-two liters.[3]" - * The footnotes would look like: - [1]one bath - [2]one homer - [3]one ephah + * The footnotes would look like: + [1]Twenty-two liters is one bath. + [2]Two hundred twenty liters is one homer. + [3]Twenty-two liters is one ephah. -### When the unit of measure is implied -Sometimes the Hebrew does not specify a particular unit of volume but only uses a number. In these cases, many English versions, including the ULB and UDB, add the word "measure." - -* **When you came to a heap of twenty measures of grain, there were only ten; and when you came to the wine vat to draw out fifty measures, there were only twenty.** (Haggai 2:16 ULB) - -#### Translation Strategies +### Translation Strategies For When the Unit of Measure is Implied 1. Translate literally by using the number without a unit. 1. Use a generic word like "measure" or "quantity" or "amount." 1. Use the name of an appropriate container, such as "basket" for grain or "jar" for wine. 1. Use a unit of measure that you are already using in your translation. -#### Examples of Translation Strategies Applied +### Examples of Translation Strategies Applied The strategies are all applied to Haggai 2:16 below.