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115 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Tom Warren 9fbf97f057 unclean 2016-08-18 14:26:49 -04:00
Tom Warren c087e23238 CLOSE QUOTATION 2016-08-18 12:15:38 -04:00
Tom Warren c847c8e86e so why? 2016-08-18 12:14:13 -04:00
lrsallee dd22ca371b Jdg 7:5 ULB - "must" to "may"
No razor must come onto his head,
2016-08-18 11:00:29 -04:00
lrsallee b347da52fc Jdg 8:8 ULB - fixed RQ
The original missed the negativity in the question.

We do not know why we should give bread to your army.
2016-08-18 10:52:28 -04:00
aaronfenlason bbc72718dc Update 03.usfm 2016-08-17 15:07:19 -05:00
aaronfenlason 63ebf9b7bf Update 16.usfm 2016-08-16 16:26:02 -05:00
aaronfenlason 321e1cb8c7 Update 03.usfm 2016-08-16 14:46:14 -05:00
aaronfenlason 85af2e70fc "Attack" in vv. 1, 2, 4
The language of "going up" when referring to battle is everywhere else in the book rendered as "attack" or something similar. This brings these verses into conformity with the rest of the book. See also 20:18, which is parallel to 1:1-2.
2016-08-16 14:03:30 -05:00
Henry Whitney fd28863a39 Rev
Stray lines

Moved "Almighty" to ULB so can match tW list and UDB rendering to UDB.
2016-08-11 17:41:10 -04:00
Hanker10 df294949a0 Judges 15:19 change voice from passive to active
Judges 15:19 change voice from passive to active in the second sentence. Either rendering is equally valid in the Hebrew.
2016-08-09 21:02:38 -04:00
Hanker10 a867d223e3 Judges 15:18 change sentence to question
Judges 15:18 change sentence to question. Both are valid renderings of the Hebrew but the question is preferred in most translations.
2016-08-09 20:57:55 -04:00
Hanker10 a60ee78460 Judges 15:17 change agent to active voice
Judges 15:17 change agent to active voice. This is an equally valid rendering of the Hebrew and clearer to the MTTs.
2016-08-09 20:52:13 -04:00
Hanker10 be3e85a43c Judges 15:13 correct word order
Judges 15:13 correct word order in phrase "to over them" to what you see.
2016-08-09 20:38:56 -04:00
Hanker10 5e94682de0 Judges 15:6 drop comma
Judges 15:6 drop comma that was not necessary and disturbed flow of discourse.
2016-08-09 20:28:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney 9c11d8e66c spaces 2016-08-08 14:58:39 -04:00
Henry Whitney 70c7a69bf5 Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/master'
# Conflicts:
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2016-08-08 14:57:50 -04:00
Henry Whitney 01654301c0 double spaces 2016-08-08 14:52:12 -04:00
Hanker10 331dda4687 Judges 20:8 cut extra word "to"
Judges 20:8 cut extra word "to"
2016-08-08 14:46:48 -04:00
Hanker10 dcfaec9c1e Judges 20:3 change punctuation
Judges 20:3 change punctuation
2016-08-08 14:42:16 -04:00
Hanker10 eac89efdbf Judges 21:23 change punctuation
Judges 21:23 change punctuation and separate into two sentences
2016-08-04 14:14:33 -04:00
Hanker10 54cf0ec873 Judges 21:18 change punctuation
Judges 21:18 change punctuation and combine two sentences
2016-08-04 14:13:29 -04:00
Hanker10 5a19322218 Judges 21:14 change wording
Judges 21:14 change wording: drop the introductory "For" and combine two sentences.
2016-08-04 14:10:54 -04:00
Hanker10 a06bd5fbf4 Judges 20:48 change wording
Judges 20:48 change wording from "And they burned down..." to what you see.
2016-08-04 14:07:35 -04:00
Hanker10 0f9a10c337 Judges 20_ 2016-08-04 14:05:04 -04:00
Hanker10 9ee64f454f Judges 20:38 delete "Now" as first word
Judges 20:38 delete "Now" as first word of the sentence
2016-08-04 14:02:30 -04:00
Hanker10 582046d9ba Judges 20:37 change punctuation
Judges 20:37 change punctuation
2016-08-04 13:59:20 -04:00
Hanker10 7c439428f3 Judges 20:31 change punctuation
Judges 20:31 change punctuation
2016-08-04 13:56:20 -04:00
Hanker10 f9d80bf175 Judges 20:15 & 16 change punctuation
Judges 20:15 & 16 change punctuation
2016-08-04 13:53:07 -04:00
Hanker10 edc76698dc Update 19.usfm 2016-08-04 13:50:37 -04:00
Hanker10 1a0152b078 Judges 18:30 change punctuation
Judges 18:30 change punctuation
2016-08-04 13:36:58 -04:00
Hanker10 a758d22a0b Judges 18:1 change "were" to "was"
Judges 18:1 change "were" to "was" to correct verb number
2016-08-04 13:32:01 -04:00
Hanker10 d9c7d9746c Judges 16:31 change punctuation
Judges 16:31 change punctuation
2016-08-04 13:28:52 -04:00
Hanker10 eae3e54131 Judges 16:23 delete "For"
Judges 16:23 delete "For" to start the second sentence
2016-08-04 13:24:28 -04:00
Hanker10 31c778764a Judges 16:17 delete "so"
Judges 16:17 delete "so" from "and she __ pressured him"
2016-08-04 13:21:22 -04:00
Hanker10 06fafa24d7 Judges 16:6 delete "so"
Judges 16:6 delete "so" after "And" to follow Hebrew more closely
2016-08-04 13:18:49 -04:00
Hanker10 e93dec56d5 Judges 15:16 change punctuation
Judges 15:16 change punctuation
2016-08-04 13:11:10 -04:00
Hanker10 77f06a1c7c Judges 15:10 change wording
Judges 15:10 change wording of clause connectors
2016-08-04 13:09:27 -04:00
Hanker10 aae0acab76 Judges 14:5b added "look,"
Judges 14:5b added "look," for the Hebrew original
2016-08-04 11:53:41 -04:00
Hanker10 70a7e6dd8b Judges 14:8b added "look,"
Judges 14:8b added "look,"  for the Hebrew wording
2016-08-04 11:52:05 -04:00
Hanker10 bfc8411484 Judges 14:3 cut "but" as first word
Judges 14:3 cut "but" as first word as first word of sentence
2016-08-04 11:33:38 -04:00
Hanker10 0f21613699 Judges 13:12 cut "But"
Judges 13:12 cut "But" from start of second sentence
2016-08-04 11:12:34 -04:00
Hanker10 1c251923c7 Judges 12:12 & 15 cut commas
Judges 12:12 & 15 cut commas
2016-08-04 11:08:01 -04:00
Hanker10 be0b7647a4 Update 11.usfm 2016-08-04 11:03:13 -04:00
Hanker10 9150a7c0f8 Update 05.usfm 2016-08-04 10:50:26 -04:00
Hanker10 53f9bdb0f9 Update 04.usfm 2016-08-04 10:48:56 -04:00
Hanker10 8d46b32a39 Update 03.usfm 2016-08-04 10:44:03 -04:00
Hanker10 0ab8c27269 Update 02.usfm 2016-08-04 10:37:18 -04:00
Hanker10 e4069c368a Update 09.usfm 2016-08-04 10:33:17 -04:00
Hanker10 f2f53959e0 Judges 9:19 cut extra "then"
Judges 9:19 cut extra "then" as second word of sentence
2016-08-04 10:32:09 -04:00