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 \q
-\v 22 He went after her suddenly
+\v 22 Suddenly he went after her
 \q like an ox going to slaughter,  
-\q like a deer caught in a trap,  
-\f + \ft \fqa Deer \fqa* could be a stag or an antelope. The ancient Latin translation has: \fqa lamb \fqa* ; and the ancient Greek translation has: \fqa like a dog to the muzzle \fqa* . \f*
+\q and like a fool is punished with shackles,    
+\f + \ft The ancient Greek translation has: \fqa like a dog to the muzzle \fqa* . Some translations have \fqa like a deer to the trap \fqa* The Hebrew text is difficult to understand. \f*  
 \q  
-\v 23 until an arrow pierces through its liver.
+\v 23 until an arrow pierces through his liver.  
 \q He was like a bird rushing into a snare.  
 \q He did not know that it would cost his life.  
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 \q
 \v 24 Now, my sons, listen to me;
@@ -3400,7 +3401,7 @@
 \v 19 A slave will not be corrected by words,
 \q for though he understands, there will be no response.
 \q
-\v 20 See a man who is hasty in his words?
+\v 20 Do you see a man who is hasty in his words?
 \q There is more hope for a fool than for him.
 
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