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-\v 1 Now, I write to you, beloved, this second letter to stir up your sincere mind by way of a reminder,
+\v 1 Now, I am writing to you, beloved, this second letter as a reminder to stir up your sincere mind,
-\v 2 so that you may remember the words spoken in the past by the holy prophets and the command of our Lord and savior given through your apostles.
+\v 2 so that you will recall the words spoken in the past by the holy prophets and the command of our Lord and Savior given through your apostles.
 
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-\v 3 Know this first, that mockers will come in the last days mocking you, going according to their own desires,
+\v 3 Know this first, that mockers will come in the last days. They will mock you; they will proceed according to their own desires.
-\v 4 and saying, "Where is the promise of his return? From when our fathers fell asleep, all things remain the same, since the beginning of creation."
+\v 4 They will say, "Where is the promise of his return? From when our fathers fell asleep, all things have stayed the same, since the beginning of creation."
 
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-\v 5 They willfully forget that the heavens and the earth were established out of water and through water, long ago, by the word of God,
+\v 5 They willfully forget that the heavens and the earth came to exist out of water and through water, long ago, by God's command,
-\v 6 and that through these things, the world that existed at that time was flooded by water and destroyed.
+\v 6 and that through these things, the world that existed then was destroyed, being flooded.
-\v 7 But now the heavens and the earth are reserved by that same word for fire, being reserved for the day of judgment and the destruction of the ungodly people.
+\v 7 But now the heavens and the earth are reserved for fire by that same command. They are reserved for the day of judgment and the destruction of the ungodly people.
 
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-\v 8 This should not escape your notice, beloved, that one day with the Lord is like a thousand years, and a thousand years like one day.
+\v 8 It should not escape your notice, beloved, that one day with the Lord is like a thousand years, and a thousand years are like one day.
-\v 9 The Lord does not move slowly concerning his promises, as some consider slowness to be, but he is patient toward you. He does not desire for any of you to perish, but he desires to allow time for all to repent.
+\v 9 The Lord does not move slowly concerning his promises, as some consider slowness to be. Instead, he is patient toward you. He does not desire for any of you to perish, but for everyone to make room for repentance.
 
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-\v 10 However, the day of the Lord will come as a thief. The heavens will pass away with a loud noise. The elements will be burned with fire, and the earth and the deeds in it will be revealed.
+\v 10 However, the day of the Lord will come as a thief: The heavens will pass away with a loud noise. The elements will be burned with fire, and the earth and the deeds in it will be revealed.
 \f + \ft Some versions read, \fqa The elements will be burned with fire, and the earth and the deeds in it will be burned up. \fqb \f*
 
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 \v 11 Since all these things will be destroyed in this way, what kind of people should you be? You should live holy and godly lives.
-\v 12 You should wait for the day of God and make it come more quickly. On that day, the heavens will be destroyed by fire and the elements will be melted in great heat.
+\v 12 You should should expect and hasten the coming of the day of God. On that day, the heavens will be destroyed by fire, and the elements will be melted in great heat.
-\v 13 But according to his promise, we wait for the new heavens and the new earth, where righteousness dwells.
+\v 13 But according to his promise, we are waiting for the new heavens and the new earth, where righteousness will dwell.
 
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