diff --git a/01-GEN/46.usfm b/01-GEN/46.usfm index 8cc424cd..6182384e 100644 --- a/01-GEN/46.usfm +++ b/01-GEN/46.usfm @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ \v 25 These were the sons born to Jacob by Bilhah, whom Laban gave to Rachel his daughter—seven in all. \s5 -\v 26 All the persons who came with Jacob into Egypt, who were his descendants, besides Jacob's sons' wives were sixty-six in all. +\v 26 All those who went to Egypt with Jacob, who were his descendants, not counting Jacob's sons' wives, were sixty-six in all. \v 27 With the two sons of Joseph who were born to him in Egypt, the members of his family who went to Egypt were seventy in all. \s5 diff --git a/02-EXO/01.usfm b/02-EXO/01.usfm index 276fe7d0..0e93355f 100644 --- a/02-EXO/01.usfm +++ b/02-EXO/01.usfm @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ \v 2 Reuben, Simeon, Levi, and Judah, \v 3 Issachar, Zebulun, and Benjamin, \v 4 Dan, Naphtali, Gad, and Asher. -\v 5 All the people who came out of the thigh of Jacob were seventy in number. Joseph was already in Egypt. +\v 5 All the people who were descendants of Jacob were seventy in number. Joseph was already in Egypt. \s5 \v 6 Then Joseph, all his brothers, and all that generation died. diff --git a/04-NUM/05.usfm b/04-NUM/05.usfm index 2faa4974..30a55df0 100644 --- a/04-NUM/05.usfm +++ b/04-NUM/05.usfm @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ \s5 \v 20 But if you, a woman under her husband, have gone astray, if you are defiled, and if some other man has slept with you, \v 21 then, (the priest must cause the woman to swear an oath that can bring down a curse on her, and then he must continue speaking to the woman) 'Yahweh will make you into a curse that will be shown to your people to be such. This will happen if Yahweh causes your thigh to waste away and your abdomen to swell. -\v 22 This water that brings the curse will go into your belly, swell your abdomen and waste away your thighs.' The woman is to reply, 'Yes, let that happen if I am guilty.' +\v 22 This water that brings the curse will go into your stomach and make your abdomen swell and your thighs waste away.' The woman is to reply, 'Yes, let that happen if I am guilty.' \s5 \p diff --git a/04-NUM/08.usfm b/04-NUM/08.usfm index 2925807e..370b7dad 100644 --- a/04-NUM/08.usfm +++ b/04-NUM/08.usfm @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ \s5 \v 3 Aaron did this. He lit the lamps on the lampstand to give light toward the front of it, as Yahweh had commanded Moses. -\v 4 The lampstand was made in this way: Yahweh had shown Moses the pattern for it: hammered gold from its base to its top, with hammered cups like blossoms. +\v 4 The lampstand was made in this way and Yahweh showed Moses the pattern for it. It was to be hammered gold from its base to its top, with hammered cups like blossoms. \s5 \p diff --git a/07-JDG/08.usfm b/07-JDG/08.usfm index 6525c238..baadac50 100644 --- a/07-JDG/08.usfm +++ b/07-JDG/08.usfm @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 29 Jerub Baal, son of Joash, went and lived in his own house. -\v 30 Gideon fathered seventy sons, for he had many wives. +\v 30 Gideon had seventy sons who were his descendants, for he had many wives. \v 31 His concubine, who was in Shechem, also bore him a son, and Gideon gave him the name Abimelech. \s5 diff --git a/19-PSA/045.usfm b/19-PSA/045.usfm index 8cd6c03e..a2cde9c0 100644 --- a/19-PSA/045.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/045.usfm @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 3 Put your sword on your thigh, mighty one, +\v 3 Put your sword on your side, mighty one, \q in your glory and your majesty. \q \v 4 In your majesty ride on triumphantly diff --git a/26-EZK/21.usfm b/26-EZK/21.usfm index 9f122b9a..c7c83d76 100644 --- a/26-EZK/21.usfm +++ b/26-EZK/21.usfm @@ -30,8 +30,8 @@ \s5 \q -\v 12 Call for help and lament, son of man! For that sword has come on my people! It is on all the leaders of Israel -\q who are thrown onto the sword! They were my people, so slap your upper thigh in grief! +\v 12 Call for help and lament, son of man! For that sword has come against my people! It is against all the leaders of Israel. +\q They are thrown against the sword with my people. Therefore, slap your thigh in grief! \q \v 13 For there is a trial, but what if the scepter does not last?—this is the Lord Yahweh's declaration.