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 \q2 and God has remembered her evil actions.
 \q
 \v 6 Pay her back as she has paid others back,
-\q2 and repay her double for what she has done;
+\q2 and repay her double for her deeds;
 \q2 in the cup she mixed, mix double the amount for her.
 
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 \v 11 The merchants of the earth weep and mourn for her since no one buys their merchandise anymore—
 \v 12 merchandise of gold, silver, precious stone, pearls, fine linen, purple, silk, scarlet, all kinds of scented wood, every vessel of ivory, every vessel made of most precious wood, bronze, iron, marble,
-\v 13 cinnamon, spice, incense, myrrh, frankincense, wine, oil, fine flour, wheat, cattle and sheep, horses and chariots, and slaves and human souls.
+\v 13 cinnamon, spice, incense, myrrh, frankincense, wine, oil, fine flour, wheat, cattle and sheep, horses and chariots and bodies, and human souls.
 
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 \v 14 The fruit that you longed for with all your might is gone from you. All your luxury and splendor have vanished, never to be found again.
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 \q2 and was adorned with gold,
 \q3 precious jewels, and pearls!
 \q2
-\v 17 In a single hour all that wealth has been wasted."
-\m Every ship's captain, every seafaring man, sailors, and all whose living is made from the sea stood off at a distance.
+\v 17 In a single hour all that wealth has been laid waste."
+\m Every ship's captain, every seafaring man, sailors, and all who make their living from the sea stood off at a distance.
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 \q "Woe, woe to the great city
 \q2 where all who had their ships
 \q2 at sea became rich from her wealth.
-\q For in a single hour she has been destroyed."
+\q For in a single hour she has been laid waste."
 \q
 \v 20 "Rejoice over her, heaven,
 \q2 you holy people and apostles and prophets,
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-\v 1 After these things I heard what sounded like a loud voice of a large number of people in heaven saying,
+\v 1 After these things I heard what sounded like a loud voice of a large number of people in heaven calling out,
 \q "Hallelujah.
 \q Salvation, glory, and power belong to our God.
 \q2
 \v 2 His judgments are true and just,
 \q for he has judged the great prostitute
 \q2 who corrupted the earth with her sexual immorality.
-\q He has taken revenge for the blood of his servants,
-\q2 which she herself shed."
+\q He has taken revenge for the blood of his servants
+\q2 from her hand."
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 \v 6 Then I heard what sounded like the voice of a great number of people, like the roar of many waters, and like loud crashes of thunder, saying,
 \q "Hallelujah!
-\q For the Lord reigns, the God who rules over all.
+\q For the Lord reigns, our God, the Almighty.
 
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 \q
-\v 7 Let us rejoice and be very happy
+\v 7 Let us rejoice and exult
 \q2 and give him the glory
 \q because the wedding celebration of the Lamb has come,
 \q2 and his bride has made herself ready.
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-\v 19 I saw the beast and the kings of the earth with their armies. They were gathering in order to wage war with the one who rode the horse and with his army.
+\v 19 I saw the beast and the kings of the earth with their armies. They were assembling in order to wage war with the one who rode the horse and with his army.
 \v 20 The beast was captured and with him the false prophet who performed the signs in his presence. With these signs he deceived those who had received the mark of the beast and who worshiped his image. The two of them were thrown alive into the fiery lake of burning sulfur.
 
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 \v 12 I saw the dead—the mighty and the unimportant—standing before the throne, and the books were opened. Then another book was opened—the Book of Life. The dead were judged by what was recorded in the books, according to their deeds.
 
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-\v 13 The sea gave up the dead who were in it. Death and Hades gave up the dead who were in them, and the dead were judged according to what they had done.
+\v 13 The sea gave up the dead who were in it. Death and Hades gave up the dead who were in them, and the dead were judged according to their deeds.
 \v 14 Death and Hades were thrown into the lake of fire. This is the second death—the lake of fire.
 \v 15 If anyone's name was not found written in the Book of Life, he was thrown into the lake of fire.
 
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 \v 11 The one who is unrighteous, let him continue to do unrighteousness. The one who is morally filthy, let him continue to be morally filthy. The one who is righteous, let him continue to do what is righteous. The one who is holy, let him continue to be holy."
 
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-\v 12 "Look! I am coming soon. My reward is with me, to pay back each one according to what he has done.
+\v 12 "Look! I am coming soon. My reward is with me, to pay back each one according to his deeds.
 \v 13 I am the Alpha and the Omega, the first and the last, the beginning and the end.
 
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