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 \v 9 yet because of love, I appeal to you instead—I, Paul, an old man, and now a prisoner for Christ Jesus—
 
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-\v 10 I ask you concerning my child Onesimus,  whom I have fathered in my bonds.
+\v 10 I am asking you concerning my child Onesimus,  whom I have fathered in my chains.
 \v 11 For he once was unprofitable to you, but now is profitable both to you and to me.
-\v 12 I have sent him—who is my very heart—back to you.
+\v 12 I have sent him—he who is my very heart—back to you.
 \v 13 I wish I could have kept him with me, so he could serve me in your place, while I am in chains for the sake of the gospel.
 
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-\v 14 But I did not want to do anything without your consent, so any good deed would not be done because I forced you, but because you wanted to do it.
-\v 15 Perhaps the reason he was separated from you for a while, was so you might have him back forever—
-\v 16 no longer as a slave, but better than a slave, as a beloved brother— especially to me, and how much more so to you, both in human terms and in the Lord.
+\v 14 But I did not want to do anything without your consent. I did this so that any good deed would not be done because I forced you, but because you wanted to do it.
+\v 15 Perhaps the reason he was separated from you for a time, was so you might have him back forever.
+\v 16 So that he would no longer as a slave, but better than a slave, as a beloved brother— especially to me, and much more so to you, both in human terms and in the Lord.
 
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 \v 17 And so if you regard me a partner, receive him as you would receive me.