From 3a0ae7c15ccc2ac61f4f7065953111442f5e635a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Thu, 9 Mar 2017 11:25:03 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Susan's edits --- 24-JER/02.usfm | 6 +++--- 45-ACT/24.usfm | 6 +++--- 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/24-JER/02.usfm b/24-JER/02.usfm index 47b5a7ce..01963e77 100644 --- a/24-JER/02.usfm +++ b/24-JER/02.usfm @@ -76,15 +76,15 @@ \v 20 For I broke your yoke that you had in ancient days; I tore your fetters off you. Still you said, \q 'I will not serve!' since you bowed down on every high hill and beneath every leafy tree, you adulterer. \q -\v 21 But I myself had planted you as a choice vine, a completely true seed. -\q Yet how you have changed toward me, a disloyal one from a foreign vine! +\v 21 I planted you as a choice vine, completely from pure seed. +\q How then have you have changed yourself into a corrupt, worthless vine? \q \v 22 For even if you clean yourself in the river or wash with strong soap, \q your iniquity is a stain before me—this is the declaration the Lord Yahweh. \s5 \q -\v 23 How can you say, 'I am not defiled! I have not walked after the Baals?' +\v 23 How can you say, 'I am not defiled! I have not walked after the Baals'? \q Look at your behavior in the valleys! Understand what you have done, you swift camel running its own way! \q \v 24 You are a wild donkey, accustomed to the wilderness, longing for life and panting after the useless wind! diff --git a/45-ACT/24.usfm b/45-ACT/24.usfm index 50deb287..24fa3483 100644 --- a/45-ACT/24.usfm +++ b/45-ACT/24.usfm @@ -3,8 +3,8 @@ \s5 \c 24 \p -\v 1 After five days, Ananias the chief priest, certain elders, and an orator named Tertullus went there. These men formally accused Paul before the governor. -\v 2 When Paul stood before the governor, Tertullus began to accuse him and said to the governor, "Because of you we have great peace; and your foresight brings good reform to our nation; +\v 1 After five days, Ananias the chief priest, certain elders, and an orator named Tertullus went there. These men brought charges against Paul before the governor. +\v 2 When Paul stood before the governor, Tertullus began to accuse him and said to the governor, "Because of you we have great peace, and your foresight brings good reform to our nation; \p \v 3 so with all thankfulness we welcome everything that you do, most excellent Felix. @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ \s5 \v 7 \f + \ft Some ancient copies have vs 7: \fqa But Lysias, the officer, came and took him by force out of our hands. \f* -\v 8 When you question Paul about all these matters, you will be able to learn what we accuse him of." +\v 8 When you question Paul about all these matters, you will be able to learn about these charges we are bringing against him." \f + \ft Some ancient copies add to the first part of vs 8, \fqa sending us to you.\fqa* \f* \v 9 The Jews together accused Paul, too, and said that these things were true.