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04-NUM/35.usfm

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 \v 18 If an accused man has struck his victim with a wooden weapon that might kill the victim, and if the victim dies, then the accused is indeed a murderer. He must certainly be put to death.
 
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-\v 19 The blood avenger may himself put a murderer to death. When he meets him, he may put him to death.
-\v 20 And if an accused man manhandles anyone in hatred or throws something at him, while hiding to ambush him, so that the victim dies,
-\v 21 or if he strikes him down in hatred with his hand so that the victim dies, then the accused who struck him must surely be put to death. He is a murderer. The blood avenger may put the murderer to death when he meets him.
+\v 19 The avenger of blood may put the murderer to death. When he meets him, the avenger of blood must put him to death.
+\v 20 If he strikes another in hatred or throws something at him, while hiding to ambush him, so that the victim dies,
+\v 21 or if he strikes him down in hatred with his hand so that the victim dies, then the accused who struck him must surely be put to death. He is a murderer. The avenger of blood may put the murderer to death when he meets him.
 
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 \v 23 or if he throws a stone that could kill a victim without seeing the victim, then the accused was not the victim's enemy; he was not trying to hurt the victim. But this is what to do if the victim dies anyway.
 
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-\v 24 In that case, the community must judge between the accused and the blood avenger on the basis of these rules.
-\v 25 The community must rescue the accused from the blood avenger's power. The community must return the accused to the city of refuge to which he had originally fled. He must live there until the death of the current high priest, the one who was anointed with the holy oil.
+\v 24 In that case, the community must judge between the accused and the avenger of blood on the basis of these rules.
+\v 25 The community must rescue the accused from the power of the avenger of blood. The community must return the accused to the city of refuge to which he had originally fled. He must live there until the death of the current high priest, the one who was anointed with the holy oil.
 
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 \v 26 But if the accused man at any time goes beyond the border of the city of refuge to which he fled,
-\v 27 and if the blood avenger finds him outside the border of his city of refuge, and if he kills the accused man, the blood avenger will not be guilty of murder.
+\v 27 and if the avenger of blood finds him outside the border of his city of refuge, and if he kills the accused man, the avenger of blood will not be guilty of murder.
 \v 28 This is because the accused man should have remained in his city of refuge until the death of the high priest. After the death of the high priest, the accused may return to the land where he has his own property.
 
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 \v 30 Whoever kills any person, the murderer must be killed, as testified to by the words of witnesses. But one witness' word alone may not cause any person to be put to death.
 
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-\v 31 Also, you must accept no ransom for the life of a murderer who is guilty of murder. He must certainly be put to death.
-\v 32 And you must accept no ransom for the one who has fled to a city of refuge. You must not in this way allow him to reside on his own property until the high priest dies.
+\v 31 Also, you must not accept ransom for the life of a murderer who is guilty of murder. He must certainly be put to death.
+\v 32 You must not accept ransom for the one who has fled to a city of refuge. You must not in this way allow him to reside on his own property until the high priest dies.
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 \v 33 Do not pollute in this way the land where you live, because blood from murder pollutes the land. No atonement can be made for the land when blood has been shed on it, except by the blood of the one who shed it.
 \v 34 So you must not defile the land in which you live because I am living in it. I, Yahweh, live among the people of Israel.'"

05-DEU/19.usfm

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 \v 5 as when a man goes into the forest with his neighbor to cut wood, and his hand strikes with the ax to cut down a tree, and the head slips from the shaft and strikes his neighbor so that he dies—then that man must flee to one of these cities and live.
 
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-\v 6 Otherwise the blood avenger might go after the one who took a life, and in hot anger he overtakes him because it was a long journey. And he strikes him and kills him, though that man did not deserve to die; and so he does not deserve the death penalty since he did not hate his neighbor before this happened.
+\v 6 Otherwise the avenger of blood might go after the one who took a life, and in hot anger he overtakes him because it was a long journey. And he strikes him and kills him, though that man did not deserve to die; and so he does not deserve the death penalty since he did not hate his neighbor before this happened.
 \v 7 Therefore I command you to select three cities for yourself.
 
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