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 \q1 they will be restored.
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 \v 5 Foreigners will be the ones who will take care of your flocks of sheep and goats,
-\q2 and plow your fields and take care of your grapevines.
+\q2 plow your fields, and take care of your grapevines.
 
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@@ -6383,10 +6383,10 @@ For the bed is too short to stretch oneself on, and the covering too narrow to w
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 \v 10 I greatly rejoice because of what Yahweh has done!
-\q2 I am happy in all my inner being,
+\q2 I am happy in all my inner being
 \q1 because he has saved me and declared that I am righteous;
 \q2 those blessings are like a robe that he has put on me.
-\q1 I am as happy as a bridegroom in his wedding clothes,
+\q1 I am as happy as a bridegroom in his wedding clothes
 \q2 or a bride wearing jewels.
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 \v 11 Just as seeds sown in a garden sprout from the soil and grow,
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-\v 3 It will be as though Yahweh had held you up in his hands in order that everyone can see you.
+\v 3 It will be as though Yahweh had held you up in his hands so that everyone can see you.
 \q2 Under his authority you will be like a crown worn by a king.
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 \v 4 Your city will never again be called 'the deserted city,' and your country will never again be called 'the desolate land';
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 \q1 Look! He will be bringing to you your reward;
 \q2 those whom he has rescued will be going ahead of him."
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-\v 12 They will be called: "Yahweh's own people,
+\v 12 They will be called "Yahweh's own people,
 \q2 and ones whom he rescued."
-\q1 And Jerusalem will be known as: "The city that Yahweh loves,"
-\q2 and "The city that is no longer abandoned."
+\q1 And Jerusalem will be known as "The city that Yahweh loves,
+\q2 and the city that is no longer abandoned."
 
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@@ -6497,7 +6497,7 @@ For the bed is too short to stretch oneself on, and the covering too narrow to w
 \q2 I was able to do that because I was very angry.
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 \v 6 Because I was extremely angry, I punished the nations;
-\q2 I caused them to stagger like drunk men,
+\q2 I caused them to stagger like drunken men,
 \q1 and I caused their blood to pour out on the ground."
 
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 \q2 and he has steadfastly and faithfully loved us.
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 \v 8 Yahweh said, "These are my people;
-\q2 they will not deceive me";
+\q2 they will not deceive me,"
 \q2 so he rescued us.
 
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 \q1 He sent his angel from before his presence to rescue us.
 \q2 Because he loved us and was merciful to us,
 \q2 he saved us;
-\q2 it was as though he had picked our ancestors up and carried them all those years during which they were oppressed in Egypt.
+\q2 it was as though he had picked up our ancestors and carried them all those years during which they were oppressed in Egypt.
 
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@@ -6562,7 +6562,7 @@ For the bed is too short to stretch oneself on, and the covering too narrow to w
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 \v 16 You are our father, even if
 \q2 Abraham does not know what is happening to us,
-\q2 and Jacob is not concerned about us, either,
+\q2 and Jacob is not concerned about us either,
 \q1 but Yahweh, you are our father;
 \q2 you rescued us long ago.
 
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 \v 17 Yahweh, why did you cause us to wander away from your road?
 \q2 Why did you cause us to be stubborn in our inner beings,
 \q2 with the result that we no longer honor you?
-\q1 Help us like you did previously,
+\q1 Help us like you did previously
 \q2 because we are the people who serve you and belong to you.
 
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 \v 16 The people in this land have had many troubles,
 \q2 but I will cause those troubles to occur no more.
 \q1 Therefore those who request me to bless them and those who solemnly promise to do something
-\q2 should never forget that I am God, who faithfully do what I promise to do.
+\q2 should never forget that I am God, who faithfully does what I promise to do.
 
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