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@@ -2983,10 +2983,8 @@ but a poor person will find that his poverty separates him from the one friend h
 \q2 it will never do him any good.
 \s5
 \q1
-\v 9 When a drunk man picks up a bush full of thorns
-\q2 and starts to swing it around at people,
-\q2 that is as helpful as a fool reciting proverbs,
-\q2 people stand back and try to get away from him.
+\v 9 When you see a drunk man picking up a bush full of thorns,
+\q2 that is as helpful as a fool reciting proverbs.
 \q1
 \v 10 An archer who aims and shoots arrows at people standing around him,
 \q2 is as dangerous as one who hires a fool