Ch 31-34 minor edits/corrections

05-DEU.usfm

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 \v 1 When Moses finished saying all that to the Israelite people,
-\v 2 "I am 120 years old. I am no longer able to go everywhere that you need to go, so I cannot be your leader any longer. Furthermore, Yahweh has told me that I will not cross the Jordan River.
+\v 2 then he said to them, "I am 120 years old. I am no longer able to go everywhere that you need to go, so I cannot be your leader any longer. Furthermore, Yahweh has told me that I will not cross the Jordan River.
 \v 3 But Yahweh our God will go ahead of you. He will enable you to destroy the nations that are living there, in order that you can occupy their land. Joshua will be your leader, which is what Yahweh has already told me.
 
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-\v 4 Yahweh will do to those nations what he did to Sihon and Og, the two kings of the Amor people when he destroyed their armies and their peoples.
+\v 4 Yahweh will do to those nations what he did to Sihon and Og, the two kings of the Amor people, when he destroyed their armies and their peoples.
 \v 5 Yahweh will enable you to conquer those peoples, but you must kill all of those people, which is what I have commanded you to do.
 \v 6 Be brave and confident. Do not be afraid of those people. Do not forget that it is Yahweh our God who will go with you. He will always help you and never abandon you."
 
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-\v 14 The cows gave them plenty of curds; the goats gave them plenty of milk,
+\v 14 The cows gave them plenty of curds, the goats gave them plenty of milk,
-\q they had well fed sheep and cattle,
+\q they had well-fed sheep and cattle,
 \q they had very good wheat,
 \q and they made delicious wine from their grapes.
 
@@ -2177,10 +2177,10 @@
 
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-\v 17 They offered sacrifices to gods who were really demons,
+\v 17 They offered sacrifices to gods that were really demons,
 \q gods that their ancestors had never known;
 \q they offered sacrifices to gods that they had recently found out about,
-\q gods whom your ancestors had never had any respect for.
+\q gods that your ancestors had never had any respect for.
 \q
 \v 18 They forgot the true God, the one who protects them,
 \q the one who created them and caused them to live.
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 \v 21 Because they now are worshiping idols, which are not really gods,
-\q they have caused me to be like a jealous husband because I want them to worship only me.
+\q they have caused me to be like a jealous husband, because I want them to worship only me.
 \q So now, in order to cause them to become angry,
 \q I will now send to attack them an army of a nation of worthless and foolish people.
 
@@ -2221,8 +2221,8 @@
 
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-\v 25 Outside their houses, their enemies will kill them with swords,
+\v 25 Outside their houses their enemies will kill them with swords,
-\q and in their homes, their enemies will cause them to be terrified.
+\q and in their homes their enemies will cause them to be terrified.
 \q Their enemies will kill young men and young women,
 \q and they will kill infants and old people with gray hair.
 \q
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-\v 1 Then Moses climbed up from the plains in the region of Moab to Mount Nebo, to the highest point on Mount Pisgah, which is across the Jordan River from Jericho. There Yahweh showed him all the land that the Israelites would occupy. He showed him the region of Gilead as far north as the city of Dan;
+\v 1 Then Moses climbed up from the plains in the region of Moab to Mount Nebo, to the highest point on Mount Pisgah, which is across the Jordan River from Jericho. There Yahweh showed him all the land that the Israelites would occupy. He showed him the region of Gilead as far north as the city of Dan,
-\v 2 all the land that the tribe of Naphtali would occupy; all the land that the tribes of Ephraim and Manasseh had occupied; all the land that the tribe of Judah would occupy as far west as the Mediterranean Sea;
+\v 2 all the land that the tribe of Naphtali would occupy, all the land that the tribes of Ephraim and Manasseh would occupy, all the land that the tribe of Judah would occupy as far west as the Mediterranean Sea,
-\v 3 the desert area in the south part of Judah; and the Valley of the Jordan that extends from Jericho in the north to the city of Zoar in the south.
+\v 3 the desert area in the south part of Judah, and the Valley of the Jordan that extends from Jericho in the north to the city of Zoar in the south.
 
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 \v 4 Then Yahweh said to him, "You have now seen this land that I solemnly promised to Abraham, Isaac, and Jacob, saying 'I will give it to your descendants.' I have allowed you to see it from a distance, but you will not go there."