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Connecting Statement:

John continues to describe the horses and the plagues brought upon humanity.

A third of the people

"One third of the people." See how you translated "A third" in Revelation 8:7. (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-fraction)

For the power of the horses was in their mouths and in their tails

The abstract noun "power" can be translated with an adjective. AT: "For it was the horses' mouths and tails that were so powerful" or "for it was the horses' mouths and tails that were able to hurt people" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns)