From e6ba4641d248d51d10aaead6daf3265ae66ed77c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Wed, 8 Aug 2018 13:29:02 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] FD issues --- col/03/13.md | 2 +- col/03/14.md | 2 +- col/03/15.md | 2 +- col/03/16.md | 4 ++-- col/03/17.md | 2 +- col/03/18.md | 2 +- 6 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/col/03/13.md b/col/03/13.md index 55fe465d29..a538220314 100644 --- a/col/03/13.md +++ b/col/03/13.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ # Be gracious to each other -"Treat each other better than they deserve for you to treat them" +"Treat others better than they deserve to have you to treat them" # has a complaint against diff --git a/col/03/14.md b/col/03/14.md index 1c7ecb1554..65bc7910eb 100644 --- a/col/03/14.md +++ b/col/03/14.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ # have love, which is the bond of perfection -Here "bond of perfection" is a metaphor for something that causes perfect unity among people. Alternate translation: "love one another because it will unite you perfectly together. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +Here "bond of perfection" is a metaphor for something that causes perfect unity among people. Alternate translation: "love one another because doing so will unite you perfectly together. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) diff --git a/col/03/15.md b/col/03/15.md index 899475b50e..630b01d537 100644 --- a/col/03/15.md +++ b/col/03/15.md @@ -4,5 +4,5 @@ Paul speaks of the peace that Christ gives as if it were a ruler. Possible meani # in your hearts -Here "hearts" is a metonym for a people's minds or inner being. Alternate translation: "in your minds" or "inside of you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) +Here "hearts" is a metonym for a people's minds or inner beings. Alternate translation: "in your minds" or "inside of you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) diff --git a/col/03/16.md b/col/03/16.md index 4d198a886d..f705b5485c 100644 --- a/col/03/16.md +++ b/col/03/16.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Let the word of Christ live in you +# Let the word of Christ live in you richly Paul speaks of Christ's word as if it were a person capable of living inside other people. "Word of Christ" here is a metonym for the teachings of Christ. Alternate translation: "Be obedient to the instructions of Christ" or "Always trust Christ's promises" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) @@ -12,5 +12,5 @@ Paul speaks of Christ's word as if it were a person capable of living inside oth # Sing with thankfulness in your hearts -Here "hearts" is a metonym for people's minds or inner being. Alternate translation: "Sing with thankfulness in your minds" or "Sing and be thankful" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) +Here "hearts" is a metonym for people's minds or inner beings. Alternate translation: "Sing with thankfulness in your minds" or "Sing and be thankful" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) diff --git a/col/03/17.md b/col/03/17.md index 3bddb760f2..39c8cccc93 100644 --- a/col/03/17.md +++ b/col/03/17.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ # in the name of the Lord Jesus -Acting in the name of a person here is a metonym for acting to help other people think well of that person. Alternate translation: "to honor the Lord Jesus" or "so that others will know you belong to the Lord Jesus and think well of him" or "as if the Lord Jesus himself were doing it" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) +Acting in the name of a person here is a metonym for acting to help other people think well of that person. Alternate translation: "to honor the Lord Jesus" or "so that others will know you belong to the Lord Jesus and will think well of him" or "as if the Lord Jesus himself were doing it" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) # through him diff --git a/col/03/18.md b/col/03/18.md index 4eb1d3df65..fe5680d825 100644 --- a/col/03/18.md +++ b/col/03/18.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # Connecting Statement: -Paul then gives some special instructions to wives, husbands, children, fathers, slaves, and masters. +Paul begins to give special instructions to wives, husbands, children, fathers, slaves, and masters. # Wives, submit to