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@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Because of those that would oppose God's word, Paul gives Titus reasons to preac
 
 # rebellious people
 
-These are rebellious people opposing Paul's gospel message.
+These are rebellious people who oppose Paul's gospel message.
 
 # empty talkers and deceivers
 
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ This phrase describes the rebellious people mentioned in the previous phrase. He
 
 # those of the circumcision
 
-This refers to the Christian Jews who taught that one must be circumcised as they are in order to follow Christ. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+This refers to the Christian Jews who taught that men must be circumcised in order to follow Christ. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
 
 # It is necessary to stop them
@@ -25,11 +25,11 @@ These are things that are not proper to teach regarding Christ and the Law becau
 
 # for shameful profit
 
-This refers only to profit that people make by doing things that are not honorable.
+This refers to profit that people make by doing things that are not honorable.
 
 # are breaking up whole families
 
-"are ruining whole families." The issue was that they were destroying the faith of the families. This may have caused the families to break up.
+"are ruining whole families." The issue was that they upsetting families by destroying their faith. This may have caused the members of the families to argue with one another.
 
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