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-# Have you entered the storehouses for the snow, or have you seen the storehouses for the hail ... and war?
+# Connecting Statement:
 
-These questions expect a negative answer. They can be translated as a statement. Alternate translation: "You have never entered the storehouses for the snow, or seen the storehouses for the hail ... and war." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]])
+The rhetorical question that begins with the words "Have you entered" in verse 22 ends here.
 
+# these things that I have kept ... and war?
+
+The rhetorical question that begins with the words "Have you entered" in verse 22 ends here. "You have never entered the storehouses for the snow, and you have never seen the storehouses for the hail, these things that I have kept ... and war." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]])
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+# these things that I have kept
+
+The words "these things" refer to the snow and the hail (verse 22).
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