diff --git a/luk/01/05.md b/luk/01/05.md index a786f4d3f2..f9a634d2d9 100644 --- a/luk/01/05.md +++ b/luk/01/05.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Zechariah and Elizabeth are introduced. These verses give background information # In the days of Herod, king of Judea -The phrase "In the day of" is used to indicate a new event. AT: "During the time that King Herod ruled over Judea" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-newevent]]) +The phrase "In the days of" is used to indicate a new event. AT: "During the time that King Herod ruled over Judea" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-newevent]]) # there was a certain diff --git a/luk/01/11.md b/luk/01/11.md index 9771a8f601..c090598991 100644 --- a/luk/01/11.md +++ b/luk/01/11.md @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ These two phrases mean the same thing, and emphasize how afraid Zechariah was. # When Zechariah saw him -"when Zechariah saw the angel." The source of the fear was the frightening nature of the angel. Zechariah had not done anything wrong. +"When Zechariah saw the angel." Zechariah was afraid because the appearance of the angel was frightening. He had not done anything wrong, so he was not afraid that the angel would punish him. # fear fell on him diff --git a/luk/01/14.md b/luk/01/14.md index e925d3ba2f..09ebd447c6 100644 --- a/luk/01/14.md +++ b/luk/01/14.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # For -"Because" or "In addition to this" +"This is because." Zechariah and the "many" will rejoice because John will be "great in the sight of the Lord." The rest of verse 15 tells how God wants John to live. # You will have joy and gladness diff --git a/mrk/11/24.md b/mrk/11/24.md index dabd1fa667..11e6b74311 100644 --- a/mrk/11/24.md +++ b/mrk/11/24.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ # it will be yours -It is understood that this will happen because God will provide what you ask for. This can be stated clearly. AT: "God will do it for you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) +It is understood that this will happen because God will provide what you ask for. This can be stated clearly. AT: "God will give it to you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) # When you stand and pray diff --git a/mrk/11/27.md b/mrk/11/27.md index 0d9e1f2003..081ee97f0c 100644 --- a/mrk/11/27.md +++ b/mrk/11/27.md @@ -16,11 +16,11 @@ The word "They" refers to the chief priests, the scribes, and the elders. # By what authority do you do these things, and who gave you the authority to do them? -Both of these questions have the same meaning and are asked together to strongly question Jesus' authority. They can be combined. AT: "Who gave you authority to do these things?" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) +Possible meanings: 1) Both of these questions have the same meaning and are asked together to strongly question Jesus' authority and so can be combined. AT: "Who gave you authority to do these things?" 2) They are two separate questions, the first asking about the nature of the authority and the second about who gave it to him. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) # you do these things -The words "these things" refer to Jesus turning over the sellers' tables in the temple and speaking against what the chief priests and scribes taught. AT: "you to do things like those you did here yesterday" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) +The words "these things" refer to Jesus turning over the sellers' tables in the temple and speaking against what the chief priests and scribes taught. AT: "things like those you did here yesterday" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) # translationWords diff --git a/mrk/12/01.md b/mrk/12/01.md index 6462156ca4..1fe20df087 100644 --- a/mrk/12/01.md +++ b/mrk/12/01.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Jesus speaks this parable against the chief priests, the scribes, and the elders # Then Jesus began to teach them -The word "them" here refers to the chief priests, the scribes, and the elders to whom Jesus has been talking to in the previous chapter. +The word "them" here refers to the chief priests, the scribes, and the elders to whom Jesus had been talking in the previous chapter. # put a hedge around it @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ This means that he carved a pit on the rock, which would be the bottom part of t # leased the vineyard to vine growers -This means that the owner of the vineyard arranged for others to care for the grapes. The vine growers would receive a share of the grapes as payment for their work. +The owner still owned the vineyard, but he allowed the vine growers to take care of it. When the grapes became ripe, they were to give some of them to the owner and keep the rest. # At the right time diff --git a/mrk/12/10.md b/mrk/12/10.md index ed3f94927e..e7a67ffbfc 100644 --- a/mrk/12/10.md +++ b/mrk/12/10.md @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Here "in our eyes" stands for seeing, which is a metaphor for the people's opini # They sought to arrest Jesus -"They" refers to the chief priests, scribes, and elders. This group may be referred to as the "Jewish leaders" . +"They" refers to the chief priests, scribes, and elders. This group may be referred to as the "Jewish leaders." # sought diff --git a/mrk/12/13.md b/mrk/12/13.md index a8068d6c80..4638a055ba 100644 --- a/mrk/12/13.md +++ b/mrk/12/13.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ In an effort to trap Jesus, some of the Pharisees and Herodians, and then the Sa # the Herodians -This is the name of an informal political party that supported Herod Antipas. +This was the name of an informal political party that supported Herod Antipas. # to trap him diff --git a/mrk/12/16.md b/mrk/12/16.md index 1d1dfc5187..8dab8d1424 100644 --- a/mrk/12/16.md +++ b/mrk/12/16.md @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ The understood verb may be supplied. AT: "and give to God" (See: [[rc://en/ta/ma # They marveled at him -They were amazed at what Jesus had said. This can be made explicit. AT: "They marveled at him and at what he said" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) +They were amazed at what Jesus had said. This can be made explicit. AT: "They marveled at him and at what he had said" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) # translationWords diff --git a/mrk/12/20.md b/mrk/12/20.md index 82ed78c02f..2a53d04622 100644 --- a/mrk/12/20.md +++ b/mrk/12/20.md @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ Each of the brothers married the woman and then died before he had any children # In the resurrection, when they rise again, whose wife will she be? -The Sadducees are testing Jesus by asking this question. This can be written as a statement. AT: "Now tell us whose wife she will be in the resurrection, when they all rise again." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) +The Sadducees are testing Jesus by asking this question. If your readers can only understand this as a request for information, this can be written as a statement. AT: "Now tell us whose wife she will be in the resurrection, when they all rise again." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]]) # translationWords diff --git a/mrk/12/24.md b/mrk/12/24.md index c284110911..9990ce7d20 100644 --- a/mrk/12/24.md +++ b/mrk/12/24.md @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ This means to become alive again. The phrase "the dead ones" refers to "dead peo # are given in marriage -This can be stated in active form. AT: "they do not marry, and no one gives them in marriage" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) +This can be stated in active form. AT: "and no one gives them in marriage" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) # heaven diff --git a/mrk/12/35.md b/mrk/12/35.md index 0e8c73491d..3e296be0b1 100644 --- a/mrk/12/35.md +++ b/mrk/12/35.md @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ This word "himself" refers to David and is used to place emphasis on him and wha # in the Holy Spirit -This means that he was inspired by the Holy Spirit, that is, the Holy Spirit directed David in what he said. AT: "inspired by the Holy Spirit" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]]) +This means that he was inspired by the Holy Spirit. That is, the Holy Spirit directed David in what he said. AT: "inspired by the Holy Spirit" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]]) # said, 'The Lord said to my Lord diff --git a/mrk/12/38.md b/mrk/12/38.md index 22e494d90b..1225c1ce25 100644 --- a/mrk/12/38.md +++ b/mrk/12/38.md @@ -1,10 +1,14 @@ # the greetings they receive in the marketplaces -The noun "greetings" can be expressed with the verb "greet." These greetings showed that the people respected the scribes. AT: "and to be greeted respectfully in the marketplaces" or "and for people to greet them respectfully in the marketplaces" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) +The noun "greetings" can be expressed with the verb "greet." These greetings showed that the people respected the scribes. AT: "to be greeted respectfully in the marketplaces" or "people to greet them respectfully in the marketplaces" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) # They also devour widows' houses -Here Jesus describes the scribes cheating widows and stealing their houses as "devouring" their houses. AT: "They also cheat widows in order to steal their houses from them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +Here Jesus describes the scribes' cheating of widows and stealing of their houses as "devouring" their houses. AT: "They also cheat widows in order to steal their houses from them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) + +# widows' houses + +The words "widows" and "houses" are synecdoches for helpless people and all of a person's important possessions, respectively. AT: "everything from helpless people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]]) # These men will receive greater condemnation diff --git a/mrk/12/41.md b/mrk/12/41.md index 0046f5a268..f2cf964a6b 100644 --- a/mrk/12/41.md +++ b/mrk/12/41.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Still in the temple area, Jesus comments on the value of the widow's offering. # an offering box -This box was a collection box for the temple offering for all the people. +This box, which everyone could use, held temple offerings. # two mites diff --git a/mrk/12/43.md b/mrk/12/43.md index 1f8c3cc4c8..e5046222a6 100644 --- a/mrk/12/43.md +++ b/mrk/12/43.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ This indicates that the statement that follows is especially true and important. # all of them who contributed to -"all of the people who put money into" +"all the other people who put money into" # abundance @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ This indicates that the statement that follows is especially true and important. # to live on -"to survive" +"to survive on" # translationWords diff --git a/mrk/12/intro.md b/mrk/12/intro.md index ae6ae4e0b6..f96d187b39 100644 --- a/mrk/12/intro.md +++ b/mrk/12/intro.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ #### Structure and Format #### -Some translations prefer to set apart quotations of the Old Testament. The ULB and many other English translations indent the lines of 12:10-11,36, 17, which are quotations from the Old Testament. +Some translations prefer to set apart quotations of the Old Testament. The ULB and many other English translations indent the lines of 12:10-11, 36, 17, which are quotations from the Old Testament. #### Important figures of speech in this chapter #### diff --git a/mrk/13/11.md b/mrk/13/11.md index fc392fa690..365ef8841f 100644 --- a/mrk/13/11.md +++ b/mrk/13/11.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ The words "will speak" are understood from the previous phrase. AT: "but the Hol # Brother will deliver up brother to death -This means that some people will betray their bothers, and this betrayal will cause their brothers to be killed. AT: "Brother will betray their brothers, handing them over to be put to death" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]]) +This means that some people will betray their bothers, and this betrayal will cause their brothers to be killed. AT: "Brothers will betray their brothers, handing them over to be put to death" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]]) # Brother ... brother diff --git a/mrk/13/14.md b/mrk/13/14.md index 93b74e3a7b..d7ffd0cd0e 100644 --- a/mrk/13/14.md +++ b/mrk/13/14.md @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@ # the abomination of desolation -This phrase is from the book of Daniel. His audience would have been familiar with this passage and the prophesy about the abomination entering the temple and defiling it. AT: "the shameful thing that defiles the things of God" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +This phrase is from the book of Daniel. His audience would have been familiar with this passage and the prophecy about the abomination entering the temple and defiling it. AT: "the shameful thing that defiles the things of God" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) # standing where it should not be standing -Jesus' audience would have known that this refers to the temple. This can be made explicit. AT: "standing in the temple where it should not be standing" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) +Jesus' audience would have known that this refers to the temple. This can be made explicit. AT: "standing in the temple, where it should not be standing" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) # let the reader understand diff --git a/mrk/13/17.md b/mrk/13/17.md index 0dbc04009c..b1c886a2bd 100644 --- a/mrk/13/17.md +++ b/mrk/13/17.md @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ This is a polite way to say that someone is pregnant. AT: "are pregnant" (See: [ "Pray that these times" or "Pray that these things" -# winter +# the winter "the cold season" or "the cold, rainy season." This refers to the time of year when it is cold and unpleasant and difficult to travel. diff --git a/mrk/13/24.md b/mrk/13/24.md index 3ca0baf82a..87579909be 100644 --- a/mrk/13/24.md +++ b/mrk/13/24.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ This can be stated in active form. AT: "the sun will become dark" (See: [[rc://e # the moon will not give its light -Here the moon is spoken of as if it were alive and able to give something to someone else. AT: "the moon will not glow" or "the moon will be dark" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]]) +Here the moon is spoken of as if it were alive and able to give something to someone else. AT: "the moon will not shine" or "the moon will be dark" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]]) # the stars will fall from the sky diff --git a/mrk/13/28.md b/mrk/13/28.md index 0d0a90b830..841042085e 100644 --- a/mrk/13/28.md +++ b/mrk/13/28.md @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ Jesus gives two short parables here to remind people to be aware when the things that he has been explaining happen. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parables]]) -# the branch becomes tender +# the branch becomes tender and puts out its leaves -The phrase "the branch" refers to the branches of the fig tree. AT: "its branches become tender" +The phrase "the branch" refers to the branches of the fig tree. AT: "its branches become tender and put out their leaves" # tender diff --git a/mrk/13/30.md b/mrk/13/30.md index 1ad917c21f..d2d3feec83 100644 --- a/mrk/13/30.md +++ b/mrk/13/30.md @@ -26,9 +26,9 @@ Jesus speaks of words not losing their power as if they were something that will This refers to the time that the Son of Man will return. AT: "that day or that hour that the Son of Man will return" or "the day or the hour that I will return" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) -# not even the angels in heaven, nor the Son +# no one knows, not even the angels in heaven, nor the Son, but the Father -These are listed among those who do not know when the Son of Man will return. AT: "not even the angels in heaven or the Son know" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]]) +These words specify some of those who do not know when the Son of Man will return, different from the Father, who does know. AT: "no one knows—neither the angels in heaven nor the Son know—but the Father" or "neither the angels in heaven nor the Son know; no one knows but the Father" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]]) # the angels in heaven diff --git a/mrk/13/33.md b/mrk/13/33.md index a8029fd0fb..9e8f01fce7 100644 --- a/mrk/13/33.md +++ b/mrk/13/33.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # what time it is -It can be stated clearly what "time" refers to here. AT: "when that time will come when all these events will happen" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) +It can be stated clearly what "time" refers to here. AT: "when all these events will happen" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) # each one with his work diff --git a/mrk/13/35.md b/mrk/13/35.md index 35d9c5720b..5fe8204080 100644 --- a/mrk/13/35.md +++ b/mrk/13/35.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ # rooster crows -The rooster is a bird that calls out very early in the morning. The loud sound he makes is "crowing." +The rooster is a bird that "crows" very early in the morning by making a loud call. # find you sleeping diff --git a/mrk/15/01.md b/mrk/15/01.md index 8687b54d7f..29d33e919b 100644 --- a/mrk/15/01.md +++ b/mrk/15/01.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # Connecting Statement: -When the chief priests, elders, scribes, and the council gave Jesus over to Pilate, Pilate did not want to condemn him. Though the crowd brought many accusations against Jesus, he did not reply to them. +When the chief priests, the elders, the scribes, and the council gave Jesus over to Pilate, they accused Jesus of doing many bad things. When Pilate asked if what they said was true, Jesus did not answer him. # they bound Jesus and led him away diff --git a/mrk/15/06.md b/mrk/15/06.md index ef4b5aa31e..c8a7a02885 100644 --- a/mrk/15/06.md +++ b/mrk/15/06.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # Connecting Statement: -Pilate, hoping the crowd would choose Jesus, offered to release a prisoner, but the crowd asked for Barabbas instead. +Pilate, hoping the crowd will choose Jesus, offers to release a prisoner, but the crowd asks for Barabbas instead. # Now diff --git a/mrk/15/12.md b/mrk/15/12.md index 8606b148f2..2fa97c7637 100644 --- a/mrk/15/12.md +++ b/mrk/15/12.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # Connecting Statement: -The crowd asks for Jesus' death so Pilate turns him over to the soldiers who mock him, crown him with thorns, strike him, and lead him out to crucify him. +The crowd asks for Jesus' death, so Pilate turns him over to the soldiers, who mock him, crown him with thorns, strike him, and lead him out to crucify him. # What then should I do with the King of the Jews diff --git a/mrk/15/14.md b/mrk/15/14.md index 9f885ed04e..071d3f5836 100644 --- a/mrk/15/14.md +++ b/mrk/15/14.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Pilate did not actually scourge Jesus but rather his soldiers did. # scourged -"flogged." This means to beat with an especially painful whip. +"flogged." To "scourge" is to beat with an especially painful whip. # then handed him over to be crucified diff --git a/mrk/15/19.md b/mrk/15/19.md index 800a00b2bd..6fb2d842ab 100644 --- a/mrk/15/19.md +++ b/mrk/15/19.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ # bent their knees -This means to kneel. AT: "knelt" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +A person who kneels bends his knees, so those who kneel are sometimes said to "bend their knees." AT: "kneeled" or "knelt" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) # they forced him to carry his cross diff --git a/mrk/15/22.md b/mrk/15/22.md index 62b8ffb299..4ed3cacac3 100644 --- a/mrk/15/22.md +++ b/mrk/15/22.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # Connecting Statement: -The soldiers brought Jesus to Golgotha where they crucified him with two others. Many people mocked him. +The soldiers bring Jesus to Golgotha, where they crucify him with two others. Many people mock him. # Place of a Skull diff --git a/mrk/15/29.md b/mrk/15/29.md index 652e56e341..073b575a82 100644 --- a/mrk/15/29.md +++ b/mrk/15/29.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # shaking their heads -This is an action people do to show disapproval. +This is an action people do to show that they disapproved of Jesus. # Aha! diff --git a/mrk/15/33.md b/mrk/15/33.md index 8e8634cbec..c40276c59b 100644 --- a/mrk/15/33.md +++ b/mrk/15/33.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # Connecting Statement: -At noon darkness covers the whole land until three o'clock when Jesus cries out with a loud voice and dies, and the temple curtain rips from the top to the bottom. +At noon darkness covers the whole land until three o'clock, when Jesus cries out with a loud voice and dies. When Jesus dies, the temple curtain rips from the top to the bottom. # the sixth hour diff --git a/mrk/15/45.md b/mrk/15/45.md index 99f03b6078..976ca1cac4 100644 --- a/mrk/15/45.md +++ b/mrk/15/45.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Linen is cloth made from the fibers of a flax plant. See how you translated this # He took him down ... Then he rolled a stone -Joseph had help from other people to take Jesus down from the cross, preparing it for the tomb, and closing the tomb. AT: "He and others took him down ... Then they rolled a stone" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) +You may need to make explicit that Joseph probably had help from other people when he took Jesus' body down from the cross, prepared it for the tomb, and closed the tomb. AT: "He and others took him down ... Then they rolled a stone" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) # a tomb that had been cut out of a rock diff --git a/mrk/16/01.md b/mrk/16/01.md index 35427afe11..20195bd5db 100644 --- a/mrk/16/01.md +++ b/mrk/16/01.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ On the first day of the week, women come early because they expect to use spices # When the Sabbath day was over -That is, when the sun had set on the seventh day and the first day of the week had begun. +That is, after the Sabbath, the seventh day of the week, had ended and the first day of the week had begun. # translationWords diff --git a/mrk/16/12.md b/mrk/16/12.md index 280303a42f..3fb0a61eb3 100644 --- a/mrk/16/12.md +++ b/mrk/16/12.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # he appeared in a different form -Jesus was the person whom the "two of them" saw, but what they saw did not look like Jesus, so they did not know they were looking at Jesus. +The "two of them" saw Jesus, but he looked different from how he had looked previously. # two of them diff --git a/mrk/16/14.md b/mrk/16/14.md index 0a848eedaf..74a6600113 100644 --- a/mrk/16/14.md +++ b/mrk/16/14.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ When Jesus meets with the eleven, he rebukes them for their unbelief and tells t # the eleven -These are the eleven disciples who remained after Judas left them. +These are the eleven apostles who remained after Judas left them. # they were reclining at the table diff --git a/mrk/16/intro.md b/mrk/16/intro.md index 39faa42d9a..ab0b0552cd 100644 --- a/mrk/16/intro.md +++ b/mrk/16/intro.md @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ ##### Burial Practices ##### It was customary in ancient Israel to place important or wealthy people in tombs and to close up the tombs with a large rock. Only wealthy families could usually afford this kind of burial place. -=== Other possible translation difficulties in this chapter=== +### Other possible translation difficulties in this chapter ### ##### A young man ##### The gospel accounts differ as to how many men or angels appeared in this interaction. It is likely that the men were angels, but how many of them were there is unclear. It is best to translate this as it appears in the ULB without trying to reconcile these passages. (See: [Matthew 28:1-2](../../mat/28/01.md), [Luke 24:4](../../luk/24/04.md), and [John 20:1-2](../../jhn/20/01.md))