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1sa/front/intro.md

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 #### Outline of 1 Samuel ####
 
-1. Samuel as judge over Israel (1–7)
+1. Samuel as judge over Israel (1:1–7:17)
     - Samuel as a child (1:1–3:21)
     - Shiloh priesthood; the fall and death of Eli the priest (4:1–22)
-    - The Ark of God and the war with the Philistines (5:1–6:21)
+    - The ark of God and the war with the Philistines (5:1–6:21)
     - Mizpah; Samuel's rule over Israel (7:1–17)
-1. Saul and Samuel (8–15)
-    - Samuel permits the people to seek a king (8:1–22)
+1. Saul and Samuel (8:1–15:35)
+    - Samuel lets the people seek a king (8:1–22)
     - Saul anointed king (9:1–10:27)
     - Battle and victory over the Ammonites (11:1–15)
     - Samuel's farewell (12:1–25)
     - Saul's weakness and failures (13:1–15:35)
-1. Saul and David's conflict (Chapters 16–31)
+1. David and his conflicts with Saul (16:1–31:13)
     - God's choice of David to be king (16:1–23)
     - David fights Goliath (17:1–58)
     - Saul's jealousy of David; David and Jonathan (18:1–20:42)
-    - David runs away; David in Philistia (21:1–30:31)
+    - David in the wilderness; David in Philistia (21:1–30:31)
     - Death of Saul (31:1–13)
 
 #### What is the Book of 1 Samuel about? ####
 
-First Samuel is about Samuel, Saul, and David. Samuel was the last of the judges over Israel. Saul was the first king of Israel. Much of the book is about how Saul became king, then how he later sinned against God and died. God chose David to be king after Saul. This book shows how God helped and protected David when Saul tried to kill him.
+The Book of 1 Samuel is about Samuel, Saul, and David. Samuel was the last of the judges over Israel. Saul was the first king of Israel. Much of the book is about how Saul became king, then how he later sinned against God and died. God chose David to be king after Saul. This book shows how God protected David when Saul tried to kill him.
 
 #### How should the title of this book be translated? ####
  
-Translators can use the traditional title "1 Samuel," or "First Samuel." But, translators may consider a clearer title such as "The First Book About Samuel, Saul, and David." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+Translators can use the traditional title "1 Samuel" or "First Samuel." Or, translators may consider a clearer title such as "The First Book About Samuel, Saul, and David." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
 #### What is the purpose of the Book of 1 Samuel? ####
  
-The purpose 1 Samuel is show how the twelve tribes of Israel became unified under the first king of Israel. 
+The purpose of 1 Samuel is to give an account of the events leading up to David becoming king of Israel.  In 1 Samuel, the twelve tribes of Israel unite under the first king of Israel, Saul. But Saul does not obey Yahweh's commands. So God uses Samuel to choose David as a king who will trust and obey Yahweh.
 
-It is uncertain who wrote 1 Samuel. It may have been someone alive soon after king Solomon died. When Solomon died, the kingdom of Israel split into two kingdoms. The author probably lived in the southern kingdom of Judah. A descendant of David continued to rule over the southern kingdom. The author may have written 1 Samuel to defend David's right to be king. This would prove that David's descendant was the rightful king of God's people and the northern kingdom had not right to rebel against him.
+#### Who wrote the Book of 1 Samuel? #### 
+
+It is uncertain who wrote 1 Samuel. It may have been someone alive soon after King Solomon died. When Solomon died, the kingdom of Israel split into two kingdoms. The author probably lived in the southern kingdom of Judah. A descendant of David continued to rule over the southern kingdom. The author may have written 1 Samuel to defend David's right to be king. This would prove that David's descendant was the rightful king of God's people.
 
 ## Part 2: Important Religious and Cultural Concepts ##
 
 #### Who is "Yahweh's anointed"? ####
  
-There are many references in 1 Samuel to "Yahweh's anointed." This is a reference to the one whom Yahweh has chosen to be the king of his people. Also, the phrase "Yahweh's anointed" made later readers think about the future descendant of David who would become king of God's people. This person who was chosen by Yahweh would be known as the Messiah. (See: [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/anoint]], [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/peopleofgod]] and [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/christ]])
+The writer of 1 Samuel often speaks of "Yahweh's anointed." This refers to the one whom Yahweh chose to be the king of his people. Also, the phrase "Yahweh's anointed" would make later readers think about the future descendant of David who would become king of God's people. This person who Yahweh chose would be known as the Messiah. (See: [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/anoint]], [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/peopleofgod]] and [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/christ]])
 
 ## Part 3: Important Translation Issues ##
 
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 #### How is the name "Israel" used in the Bible? ####
  
-The name "Israel" is used in many different ways in the Bible. There was a man named Jacob. God changed his name to Israel. The descendants of Jacob became a nation also called Israel. Eventually, the nation of Israel split into two kingdoms. The northern kingdom was named Israel. The southern kingdom was named Judah. (See: [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/israel]])
+The name "Israel" is used in many different ways in the Bible. Jacob was the son of Isaac. God changed his name to Israel. The descendants of Jacob became a nation also called Israel. Eventually, the nation of Israel split into two kingdoms. The northern kingdom was named Israel. The southern kingdom was named Judah. (See: [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/israel]])
 
-The Book of 1 Samuel has two references to Israel and Judah ([1 Samuel 17:52](../17/52.md), [1 Samuel 18:16](../18/15.md)). However, these references appear in the narrative long before the split between the two kingdoms occurred. It seems clear that the references to Israel and Judah are in the text because the author wrote at a time after the kingdoms split. He wanted the readers to understand that all the twelve tribes had supported David.
+The Book of 1 Samuel has two references to Israel and Judah ([1 Samuel 17:52](../17/52.md), [1 Samuel 18:16](../18/15.md)). However, these references appear in the text long before the two kingdoms split apart. It seems clear that the references to Israel and Judah are in the text because the author wrote at a time after the kingdoms split. He wanted the readers to understand that all the twelve tribes had supported David.
 
 #### What is the meaning of the phrase "to this day"? ####
 
-This phrase was used by the narrator to refer to the time when he was writing. The translator should be aware that "to this day" refers to a time which has already passed. He must avoid giving the impression that the present day of the translation's readers is meant. The translator might decide to say, "to this day, at the time when this is being written" or "to this day, at the time of writing." This Hebrew phrase occurs in 1 Samuel 5:5; 6:18: 27:6; 30:25.
+This phrase was used by the narrator to refer to the time when he was writing. The translator should be aware that "to this day" refers to a time already passed. He must avoid giving the impression that the present day of the translation's readers is meant. The translator might decide to say, "to this day, at the time when this is being written" or "to this day, at the time of writing." This phrase occurs in 1 Samuel 5:5; 6:18: 27:6; 30:25.