diff --git a/luk/01/72.md b/luk/01/72.md
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--- a/luk/01/72.md
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@@ -16,15 +16,11 @@ These two phrases refer to the same thing. They are repeated to show the serious
 
 # that we, having been delivered out of the hand of our enemies, would serve him without fear
 
-It may be helpful to change the order of these phrases. AT: "that we would serve him without fear after we have rescued from the hand of our enemies"
-
-# having been delivered
-
-"having been rescued"
+This can be stated in active form. AT: "that we would serve him without fear after he rescued us from the hand of our enemies" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
 # out of the hand of our enemies
 
-"hand" refers to the control or power a person. This could be stated clearly. AT: "from the control of our enemies" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+Here "hand" refers to the control or power a person. This could be stated clearly. AT: "from the control of our enemies" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
 # without fear