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-# Tou ... Hadoram
+# Tou
 
 These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
@@ -8,5 +8,5 @@ This is the name of a place. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
 # David had defeated
 
-Here "David" represents his army. Alternate translation: "David's army had defeated" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]])
+Here "David" is a metonym for his army. Alternate translation: "David's army had defeated" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]])