diff --git a/jhn/15/05.md b/jhn/15/05.md
index 8058105f22..e36d295383 100644
--- a/jhn/15/05.md
+++ b/jhn/15/05.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ The "vine" is a metaphor that represents Jesus. The "branches" is a metaphor tha
 
 # He who remains in me and I in him
 
-Here Jesus implies that his followers are joined to him as he is joined to God. Alternate translation: "He who stays joined to me, as I stay joined to my Father" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
+"He who stays joined to me and I stay joined to him"
 
 # he bears much fruit
 
diff --git a/jhn/15/08.md b/jhn/15/08.md
index baffddec7d..7d811bef53 100644
--- a/jhn/15/08.md
+++ b/jhn/15/08.md
@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
-# My Father is glorified in this
+# My Father is glorified in this, that
 
-You can translate this in an active form. Alternate translation: "It causes people to honor my Father" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
+You can translate this in an active form. Alternate translation: "It causes people to honor my Father when" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
 # My Father
 
 This is an important title for God. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/guidelines-sonofgodprinciples]])
 
-# that you bear much fruit
+# in this, that you bear much fruit
 
 Here "fruit" is a metaphor for living to please God. Alternate translation: "when you live in a way that pleases him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
-# are my disciples
+# prove that you are my disciples
 
 "show you are my disciples" or "demonstrate you are my disciples"
 
diff --git a/jhn/15/16.md b/jhn/15/16.md
index b41d1f20f9..06c71e3cfb 100644
--- a/jhn/15/16.md
+++ b/jhn/15/16.md
@@ -2,13 +2,10 @@
 
 Jesus implies that his followers did not decide on their own to become his disciples. Alternate translation: "You did not decide to become my disciples" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
-# go and bear fruit
+# go and bear fruit, and that your fruit should remain
 
-Here "fruit" is a metaphor that represents a life that is pleasing to God. Alternate translation: "live lives that please God" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+Here "fruit" is a metaphor that represents a life that is pleasing to God. Alternate translation: "live lives that please God so that the results of what you do last forever" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
-# that your fruit should remain
-
-"that the results of what you do should last forever"
 
 # whatever you ask of the Father in my name, he will give it to you
 
diff --git a/jhn/15/21.md b/jhn/15/21.md
index 26b55f590f..36f3c4567d 100644
--- a/jhn/15/21.md
+++ b/jhn/15/21.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 # because of my name
 
-Here "because of my name" is a metonym that represents Jesus. People will make his followers suffer because they belong to him. Alternate translation: "because you belong to me" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+Here "my name" is a metonym that represents Jesus. People will make his followers suffer because they belong to him. Alternate translation: "because you belong to me" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
diff --git a/jhn/15/24.md b/jhn/15/24.md
index 815fe55624..f47e34197c 100644
--- a/jhn/15/24.md
+++ b/jhn/15/24.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # If I had not done the works that no one else did among them, they would have no sin, but
 
-You can translate this double negative in a positive form. Alternate translation: "Because I have done among them the works that no one else did, they have had sin, and" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublenegatives]])
+You can translate this double negative in a positive form. Alternate translation: "Because I have done among them the works that no one else did, they have sin, and" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublenegatives]])
 
 # they would have no sin
 
diff --git a/jhn/15/25.md b/jhn/15/25.md
index 5c62abb581..d46fea95e8 100644
--- a/jhn/15/25.md
+++ b/jhn/15/25.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # to fulfill the word that is written in their law
 
-You can translate this in an active form. "Word" here is a metonym for the entire message of God. Alternate translation: "to fulfill the prophecy in their law" and "to fulfill the prophecy in their law" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+You can translate this in an active form. "Word" here is a metonym for the entire message of God. Alternate translation: "to fulfill the prophecy in their law" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
 # law
 
diff --git a/jhn/15/26.md b/jhn/15/26.md
index 90bc974367..a375d539e5 100644
--- a/jhn/15/26.md
+++ b/jhn/15/26.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # will send ... from the Father ... the Spirit of truth ... he will testify about me
 
-God the Father sent God the Spirit to show the world that Jesus is God the Son.
+God the Father would soon send God the Spirit to show the world that Jesus is God the Son.
 
 # Father