ULB issues and FD correx

rom/05/18.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # by one trespass
 
-"through the one sin committed by Adam" or "because of Adam's sin"
+"through that one sin committed by Adam" or "because of Adam's sin"
 
 # condemnation came to all people
 

rom/10/01.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # Connecting Statement:
 
-Paul continues stating his desire for Israel to believe but emphasizes that both those who are Jews as well as everyone else can only be saved by faith in Jesus.
+Paul continues stating his desire for Israel to believe but emphasizes that both those who are Jews and those who are not can only be saved by faith in Jesus.
 
 # Brothers
 

rom/10/04.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 "For Christ completely fulfilled the law"
 
-# for righteousness for everyone who believes
+# law for righteousness for everyone who believes
 
-Here "believes" means "trusts." Alternate translation: "in order that he may make everyone who trusts in him right before God" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
+Here "believes" means "trusts." Alternate translation: "law, and he makes everyone who trusts in him right before God" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 

rom/10/06.md

@@ -1,3 +1,7 @@
+# Note:
+
+Awaiting ULB issue [1879](https://git.door43.org/WycliffeAssociates/en_ulb/issues/1879).
+
 # But the righteousness that comes from faith says this
 
 Here "righteousness" is described as a person who can speak. Alternate translation: "But Moses writes this about how faith makes a person right before God" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]])

rom/10/07.md

@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
-# Who will descend into the abyss
+# Who will descend into the abyss?
 
-Moses uses a question to teach his audience. His previous instruction of, "Do not say" requires a negative answer to this question. You can translate this as a statement. Alternate translation: "No person can go down and enter the place where the spirits of dead persons are" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]])
+Moses uses a question to teach his audience. His previous instruction of, "Do not say" requires a negative answer to this question. You can translate this as a statement. Alternate translation: "No person can go down and enter the place where the spirits of dead persons are." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]])
 
-# from the dead
+# the dead
 
-From among all those who have died. This expression describes all dead people together in the underworld. To be brought up from among them is to become alive again.
+All those who have died. This expression describes all dead people together in the underworld. To be brought up from among them is to become alive again.
 
 # dead
 

rom/10/08.md

@@ -1,18 +1,10 @@
 # But what does it say?
 
-The word "it" refers to "the righteousness" of [Romans 10:6](../10/06.md). Here Paul describes "righteousness" as a person who can speak. Paul uses a question to emphasize the answer he is about to give. Alternate translation: "But this is what Moses says" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]])
+The word "it" refers to the scripture. Alternate translation: "But this is what Moses says" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]])
 
-# The word is near you
+# The word is near you, in your mouth and in your heart
 
-Paul speaks of God's message as if it were a person who can move. Alternate translation: "You have heard the message" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]])
+Paul speaks of God's message as if it were a person who can move. The word "mouth" is a metonym that refers to what a person says. The phrase "in your heart" is metonym that refers to what a person thinks and believes. Alternate translation: "You have heard the message. You know how to speak it, and you know what it means" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
-
-# The word is ... in your mouth
-
-The word "mouth" is a metonym that refers to what a person says. Alternate translation: "You know how to speak ... God's message" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
-
-# The word is ... in your heart
-
-The phrase "in your heart" is metonym that refers to what a person thinks and believes. Alternate translation: "You know what ... God's message means" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
 # the word of faith
 

rom/10/10.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # For with the heart one believes and has righteousness, and with the mouth one confesses and is saved
 
-Here "heart" is a metonym that represents the mind or will. Alternate translation: "For it is with the mind that a person trusts and is right before God, and it is with the mouth that a person confesses and God saves him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+Here "heart" is a metonym that represents the mind or will. Alternate translation: "For it is with the mind that a person trusts and is right before God, and it is with the mouth that a person confesses so that God saves him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
 # with the mouth
 

rom/10/11.md

@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 # For scripture says
 
-Paul speaks of the Scripture as if it were alive and had a voice. You can make explicit who wrote the Scripture that Paul uses here. Alternate translation: "For Isaiah wrote in the Scriptures" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
+Paul speaks of the scripture as if it were alive and had a voice. You can make explicit who wrote the scripture that Paul uses here. Alternate translation: "For Isaiah wrote in the scripture" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
 # Everyone who believes on him will not be put to shame
 
-This is equivalent to: "Everyone who does not believe will be shamed." The negative is used here for emphasis. You can translate this in an active form. Alternate translation: "God will honor everyone who believes in him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
+This is equivalent to: "If a person believes, then that person will not be shamed." The negative is used here for emphasis. You can translate this in an active form. Alternate translation: "God will honor everyone who believes in him" or "God will shame only those who do not believe in Jesus" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 

rom/10/14.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Paul uses another question for the same reason. Alternate translation: "And they
 
 # believe in
 
-Here this means to acknowledge that what that person has said is true.
+trust and desire to obey
 
 # How can they hear without a preacher?
 

rom/10/15.md

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 # How beautiful are the feet of those who proclaim good news
 
-Paul uses "feet" to represent those who travel and bring the message to those who have not heard it. Alternate translation: "It is wonderful when messengers come and tell us the good news" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+Paul uses "feet" to represent those who travel and take the message to those who have not heard it. The feet were considered a dirty and ugly part of the body, so the idea of beautiful feet would have seemed odd to Paul's readers. Alternate translation: "How beautiful are even the feet of those who proclaim good news" or "It is wonderful when messengers go and tell others the good news" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 

rom/10/16.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Here "they" refers to the Jews. "not all of the Jews obeyed"
 
 # Lord, who has believed our message?
 
-Paul is using this question to emphasize that Isaiah prophesied in the Scriptures that many Jews would not believe in Jesus. You can translate this as a statement. Alternate translation: "Lord, so many of them do not believe our message" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]])
+Paul is using this question, which Isaiah prophesied in the Scriptures, to emphasize that many Jews would not believe in Jesus. You can translate this as a statement. Alternate translation: "Lord, so many of them do not believe our message!" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]])
 
 # our message
 

rom/10/17.md

@@ -6,3 +6,6 @@ Here "faith" refers to "believing in Christ"
 
 "hearing by listening to the message about Christ"
 
+Note:
+
+Awaiting ULB issue [1880](https://git.door43.org/WycliffeAssociates/en_ulb/issues/1880).

rom/10/19.md

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 # Moreover, I say, "Did Israel not know?"
 
-Paul uses a question for emphasis. The word "Israel" is a metonym for the people who lived in the nation of Israel. Alternate translation: "Again I tell you the people of Israel did know the message" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+Paul uses a question for emphasis. The word "Israel" is a metonym for the people who lived in the nation of Israel. Alternate translation: "Again I tell you the people of Israel did know the message." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
 # First Moses says, "I will provoke you ... I will stir you up
 

rom/10/20.md

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 # General Information:
 
-Here the words "I," "me," and "my" refer to God.
+Here the words "I" and "me" refer to God.
 
 # Then Isaiah was very bold when he says
 

rom/10/21.md

@@ -1,6 +1,10 @@
-# All the day long
+# General Information:
 
-This phrase is used to emphasize God's continual effort. "continually"
+Here the word "my" refers to God.
+
+# All the day long I
+
+This phrase is used to emphasize God's continual effort. "I continually"
 
 # I reached out my hands to a disobedient and stubborn people