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 This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "the angel threw something like a great mountain burning with fire" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
-# A third of the sea became blood
+# A third
 
-The fraction "A third" can be explained in translation. Alternate translation: "It was like the sea was divided into three parts, and one of those parts became blood" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-fraction]])
+"A third" is a fraction. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-fraction]])
 
 # became blood