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-# David took ... King David took
+# King David took
 
-Here David represents his soldiers. Alternate translation: "David's soldiers took ... King David's soldiers took" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+Here "David" is probably a metonym for his soldiers. Alternate translation: "King David's soldiers took" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
 # Tebah and Berothai