From 4caee1710696007924b3c087443ac0723e78fe97 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 10 Mar 2018 21:41:58 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 1/8] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- 1sa/25/21.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/1sa/25/21.md b/1sa/25/21.md index 74f29344e7..5627d90cda 100644 --- a/1sa/25/21.md +++ b/1sa/25/21.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ The writer gives background information before he continues with the story. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-background]]) -# Now David had said, "Surely ... for good." +# Now David had said, "Surely ... for good. The reader needs to understand that David had said these things before he said, "Every man strap on his sword" in [1 Samuel 25:13](../25/13.md). From a635138317f9b118edfefa0af5b6422bcfb9a9ee Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 10 Mar 2018 22:02:24 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 2/8] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- deu/08/17.md | 3 +++ 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+) diff --git a/deu/08/17.md b/deu/08/17.md index 630a8163df..a1b0b8b883 100644 --- a/deu/08/17.md +++ b/deu/08/17.md @@ -1,3 +1,6 @@ +# Connecting Statement: +This is the third item in the list of things that Yahweh warns the Israelites that they might do ([Deuteronomy 8:11](./11.md)), the first being "your heart becomes lifted up" and the second being "you forget Yahweh your God" ([Deuteronomy 8:14](./14.md)). + # but you may say in your heart This is the third thing the people might do when their hearts "become lifted up" and they "forget Yahweh" ([Deuteronomy 8:14](../08/14.md)). Here "heart" is a metonym for a person's innermost thoughts. Alternate translation: "but you may think to yourself" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) From e75b83c496ff425ad8c12a0a36fb4a392fc97bdb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 10 Mar 2018 22:09:39 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 3/8] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- deu/08/16.md | 4 ++++ 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+) diff --git a/deu/08/16.md b/deu/08/16.md index e37bfd0afc..be4f95a97c 100644 --- a/deu/08/16.md +++ b/deu/08/16.md @@ -1,3 +1,7 @@ +# Connecting Statement: + +This is the fourth item in the list of characteristics that Moses reminds the Israelites that they must remember about "Yahweh your God" ([Deuteronomy 8:14](./14.md)) the first being that he "brought you out of Egypt" ([Deuteronomy 8:14](./14.md)), the second that he led them "through the ... wilderness" ([Deuteronomy 8:15](./15.md)), and the third that he "brought ... water out of the rock" ([Deuteronomy 8:15](./15.md)). + # He fed Moses continues to remind the Israelites of what they know about Yahweh ([Deuteronomy 8:14](../08/14.md)). "Yahweh fed" From 0d4ffe7455397acad74dca86e6b4b69f8da43921 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 10 Mar 2018 22:10:29 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 4/8] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- deu/08/15.md | 4 ++++ 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+) diff --git a/deu/08/15.md b/deu/08/15.md index 56d942ce72..b3c7b65f42 100644 --- a/deu/08/15.md +++ b/deu/08/15.md @@ -1,3 +1,7 @@ +# Connecting Statement: + +This is the third item in the list of characteristics that Moses reminds the Israelites that they must remember about "Yahweh your God" ([Deuteronomy 8:14](./14.md)) the first being that he "brought you out of Egypt" ([Deuteronomy 8:14](./14.md)), the second that he led them "through the ... wilderness" ([Deuteronomy 8:15](./15.md)). + # General Information: Moses continues to speak to the Israelites as if they are one person. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) From b2ec12c4fba705bad60bc975f8335d1b97907ddb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 10 Mar 2018 23:13:21 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 5/8] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- deu/08/15.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/deu/08/15.md b/deu/08/15.md index b3c7b65f42..3b7fa19055 100644 --- a/deu/08/15.md +++ b/deu/08/15.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # Connecting Statement: -This is the third item in the list of characteristics that Moses reminds the Israelites that they must remember about "Yahweh your God" ([Deuteronomy 8:14](./14.md)) the first being that he "brought you out of Egypt" ([Deuteronomy 8:14](./14.md)), the second that he led them "through the ... wilderness" ([Deuteronomy 8:15](./15.md)). +This verse gives the second and third items in the list of characteristics that Moses reminds the Israelites that they must remember about "Yahweh your God" ([Deuteronomy 8:14](./14.md)) the first being that he "brought you out of Egypt" ([Deuteronomy 8:14](./14.md)). the second that he led them "through the ... wilderness," and the third that he "brought ... water out of the rock." # General Information: From 0c3041f3ebe13eaddecce129a0630000091d9bbe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 10 Mar 2018 23:22:38 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 6/8] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- deu/08/13.md | 4 ++++ 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+) diff --git a/deu/08/13.md b/deu/08/13.md index 6b22e6369c..6317e32d90 100644 --- a/deu/08/13.md +++ b/deu/08/13.md @@ -1,3 +1,7 @@ +# Connecting Statement: + +This verse describes the last three of the five things that might cause them to forget Yahweh. The first two are "you eat and are full" and "you build good houses and live in them" ([Deuteronomy 8:12](./12.md)). The last three are "when your herds and flocks multiply," "when your silver and gold increase," and "all that you have is multiplied." + # General Information: Moses continues to speak to the Israelites as if they are one person. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]]) From 589eff945f1a442dd3a7ec2b047abf75d188ca86 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 10 Mar 2018 23:26:15 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 7/8] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- deu/08/12.md | 5 +++++ 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+) diff --git a/deu/08/12.md b/deu/08/12.md index aa16aa1bc8..914a7ef579 100644 --- a/deu/08/12.md +++ b/deu/08/12.md @@ -1,3 +1,8 @@ +# Connecting Statement: + +This verse describes the first two items of a list of five things that might make the Israelites forget about Yahweh (verse 11): "when you eat and are full" and "when you build good houses." + + # when you eat and are full "when you have enough food to eat" From eb166f7fff4233f3b2597d9c13a5103e53908600 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Sat, 10 Mar 2018 23:26:24 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 8/8] Adjustment needed because of de-chunking. --- deu/08/14.md | 4 ++++ 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+) diff --git a/deu/08/14.md b/deu/08/14.md index 386511a627..be542a106b 100644 --- a/deu/08/14.md +++ b/deu/08/14.md @@ -1,3 +1,7 @@ +# Connecting Statement: + +This verse contains the first two of three items Moses warns the people to be careful of ([Deuteronomy 8:11](./11.md)): that "your heart becomes lifted up" and "you forget Yahweh your God." It then lists the first of four characteristics of Yahweh that they need to remember, that Yahweh "brought you out of the land of Egypt." + # your heart becomes lifted up Here "heart" represents the inner person. To become prideful and no longer obey Yahweh is spoken of as if the person's heart is lifted up. See how you translated a similar phrase in [Deuteronomy 8:12](../08/12.md). Alternate translation: "you become prideful and no longer obey Yahweh" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])