diff --git a/mrk/09/23.md b/mrk/09/23.md
index 408c714eac..6ac573f696 100644
--- a/mrk/09/23.md
+++ b/mrk/09/23.md
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Jesus used this question to rebuke the man's doubt. It can be expressed as a sta
 
 # for the one
 
-"for the person"
+"for the person" or "for anyone"
 
 # believes
 
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ This means that more people were running toward where Jesus was and that the cro
 
 # You mute and deaf spirit
 
-The words "mute" and "deaf" can be explained. AT: "You unclean spirit, you who are causing the boy to be unable to hear and unable to speak"
+The words "mute" and "deaf" can be explained. AT: "You unclean spirit, you who are causing the boy to be unable to speak and unable to hear"
 
 # translationWords
 
diff --git a/mrk/09/30.md b/mrk/09/30.md
index 8fc73d6f77..4db6a53da5 100644
--- a/mrk/09/30.md
+++ b/mrk/09/30.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # Connecting Statement:
 
-Jesus and his disciples left the house where they had been after Jesus had healed the demon-possessed boy. He takes time to teach his disciples alone.
+After he heals the demon-possessed boy, Jesus and his disciples leave the house where they are staying. He takes time to teach his disciples alone.
 
 # They went out from there
 
diff --git a/mrk/09/36.md b/mrk/09/36.md
index ebda053bf1..d4b255428a 100644
--- a/mrk/09/36.md
+++ b/mrk/09/36.md
@@ -12,11 +12,11 @@ This means that he hugged the child or picked him up and placed him on his lap.
 
 # in my name
 
-This means to do something because of love for Jesus. AT: "because they love me" or "for my sake" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]])
+This means to do something because of love for Jesus. AT: "because he loves me" or "for my sake" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]])
 
 # the one who sent me
 
-This refers to God who has sent him to earth. AT: "God who has sent me" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
+This refers to God, who has sent him to earth. AT: "God, who has sent me" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
 # translationWords
 
diff --git a/mrk/09/47.md b/mrk/09/47.md
index 1b9a592d9f..04aea59123 100644
--- a/mrk/09/47.md
+++ b/mrk/09/47.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Here the word "eye" is a metonym for either 1) desiring to sin by looking at som
 
 # to enter into the kingdom of God with one eye than to have two eyes
 
-This refers to the state of a person's physical body when he dies. A person does not take his physical body with him into eternity. AT: "to enter into the kingdom of God, after having lived on earth with only one eye, than to have lived on earth and had two eyes" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
+This refers to the state of a person's physical body when he dies. A person does not take his physical body with him into eternity. AT: "to enter into the kingdom of God after having lived on earth with only one eye than to have lived on earth with two eyes" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
 # to be thrown into hell