Fixing one-word snippets.

1ti/06/03.md

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ Paul speaks of people who feel compelled to engage in useless arguments as if th
 
 # strife
 
-"arguments between believers"
+arguments or fights
 
 # insults
 

2pe/02/20.md

@@ -20,11 +20,7 @@ Peter speaks of life as a "way" or path. This phrase refers to living a life tha
 
 # the holy commandment delivered to them
 
-This can be stated in active terms. AT: "the holy commandment that God brought to them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
-
-# delivered
-
-"Delivered" here is a metaphor for "brought." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+This can be stated in active terms. AT: "the holy commandment that God delivered to them" or "the holy commandment that God made sure that they received" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
 # This proverb is true for them
 

deu/08/13.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Moses continues to speak to the Israelites as if they are one person. (See: [[rc
 
 # multiply
 
-"increase in number" or "become many"
+increase greatly in number
 
 # all that you have is multiplied
 

deu/30/15.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ You can make clear the implicit information. AT: "what is good and will cause yo
 
 # multiply
 
-"have many descendants"
+increase greatly in number
 
 # translationWords
 

est/01/05.md

@@ -6,10 +6,6 @@
 
 This was a second feast that was only for the officials in Susa. AT: "another feast that lasted seven days"
 
-# seven
-
-"7" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]])
-
 # fortress
 
 This refers to a castle, stronghold or fortified city.See how you translated this in [Esther 1:1](./01.md).

est/01/13.md

@@ -10,10 +10,6 @@ This background information explains why the king called these men. (See: [[rc:/
 
 These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
-# seven
-
-"7" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]])
-
 # In compliance with the law ... by the officials?
 
 It may be helpful to state who asked this question. AT: The king said to them, "In compliance with the law ... by the officials?" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])

exo/16/04.md

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ God speaks of obeying his law as walking in it. AT: "obey my law" or "live accor
 
 # twice
 
-"two times" or "2 times" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]])
+two times
 
 # translationWords
 

exo/16/22.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ This phrase is used here to mark the beginning of a new part of the story. Verse
 
 # twice
 
-"two times" or "2 times" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]])
+two times
 
 # bread
 

ezk/16/56.md

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Here Yahweh speaks of the cities of Edom and Philistia as if they were the daugh
 
 # despise
 
-"hate"
+hate very much
 
 # this is Yahweh's declaration
 

ezk/28/01.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Here "heart" represents the will or thoughts of the ruler of Tyre. AT: "You are
 
 # arrogant
 
-"proud"
+falsely believing oneself to be importantbelieving oneself to be important
 
 # I will sit in the seat of the gods
 

ezk/28/16.md

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ Here the "heart" represents the whole person, emphasizing the person's thoughts.
 
 # arrogant
 
-"proud"
+falsely believing oneself to be importantbelieving oneself to be important
 
 # Your heart was arrogant with your beauty; you ruined your wisdom because of your splendor
 

gal/04/12.md

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ This can be stated in positive form. AT: "You treated me well" or "You treated m
 
 # despise
 
-"hate very much"
+hate very much
 
 # translationWords
 

gen/01/22.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ This is God's blessing. He told the sea animals to produce more sea animals like
 
 # multiply
 
-"increase greatly in number" or "become many"
+increase greatly in number
 
 # Let birds multiply
 

gen/08/01.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# considered
+# considered Noah
 
-"remembered" or "thought about"
+"remembered Noah" or "decided to help Noah"
 
 # ark
 

gen/13/08.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
 # strife
 
-"hostility" or "fighting" or "quarreling"
+arguments or fights
 
 # between your herdsmen and my herdsmen
 

gen/21/28.md

@@ -2,10 +2,6 @@
 
 "Abraham separated seven female lambs from the flock"
 
-# seven
-
-"7" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers]])
-
 # What is the meaning of these seven female lambs that you have set by themselves?
 
 "Why have you separated these seven lambs from the flock?"

isa/05/11.md

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ A musical instrument with a head like a drum that can be beaten with the hand. I
 
 # considered
 
-"thought seriously about"
+thought seriously about
 
 # the doings of his hands
 

isa/05/24.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ These phrases mean basically the same thing. God will punish the people describe
 
 # stubble
 
-"dry grain stalks." This refers to the part of the plant that is left in the field to die after the farmer collects the food.
+The dry pieces of plants that are left in the ground after the stalks have been cut.
 
 # their root will rot, and their blossom will blow away like dust
 

isa/33/10.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ This speaks of the Assyrians making plans as if they were conceiving and giving
 
 # stubble
 
-"straw"
+The dry pieces of plants that are left in the ground after the stalks have been cut.
 
 # your breath is a fire that will consume you
 

jer/13/15.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # arrogant
 
-"proud"
+falsely believing oneself to be important
 
 # he brings darkness
 

job/42/04.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Job's self is a metonym for what he said. AT: "I despise the things I said" (See
 
 # despise
 
-"intensely dislike" or "am unhappy with"
+intensely dislike
 
 # I repent in dust and ashes
 

luk/01/62.md

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ It may be helpful to state how Zechariah "asked," since he could not speak. AT:
 
 # astonished
 
-"very surprised" or "amazed"
+greatly surprised or amazed
 
 # translationWords
 

luk/01/72.md

@@ -18,9 +18,9 @@ These two phrases refer to the same thing. They are repeated to show the serious
 
 It may be helpful to change the order of these phrases. AT: "that we would serve him without fear after we have rescued from the hand of our enemies"
 
-# delivered
+# having been delivered
 
-"Delivered" here is a metaphor, meaning "to be brought." AT: "brought out from" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+"having been rescued"
 
 # out of the hand of our enemies
 

luk/04/31.md

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ The phrase "went down" is used here because Capernaum is lower in elevation than
 
 # astonished
 
-"greatly surprised" or "impressed" or "amazed"
+greatly surprised, greatly amazed
 
 # he spoke with authority
 

mrk/10/41.md

@@ -8,11 +8,7 @@ The word "this" refers to James and John asking to sit at Jesus' right and left
 
 # those who are considered rulers of the Gentiles
 
-This can be stated in active form. AT: "those whom the people consider to be the rulers of the Gentiles" or "those who rule over the Gentiles" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
-
-# considered
-
-"recognized as"
+This can be stated in active form. Possible meanings are 1) people in general consider these people the rulers of the Gentiles. AT: "those whom people consider to be the rulers of the Gentiles" or 2) the Gentiles consider these people their rulers. AT: "those whom the Gentiles think of as their rulers" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
 # dominate
 

mrk/14/30.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ The rooster is a bird that calls out very early in the morning. The loud sound h
 
 # twice
 
-"two times" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]])
+two times
 
 # you will deny me
 

oba/01/17.md

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ The word "house" is a metonym for the family that lives in the house. In this ca
 
 # stubble
 
-"straw" or "chaff." The dry pieces of plant that are left after grain is harvested.
+The dry pieces of plants that are left in the ground after the stalks have been cut.
 
 # and they
 

psa/099/006.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # solemn
 
-important given seriously
+important, given seriously
 
 # translationWords
 

rev/17/06.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ The angel begins to explain to John the meaning of the prostitute and the red be
 
 # astonished
 
-"amazed" or "surprised"
+amazed, surprised
 
 # Why are you astonished?
 

rom/04/23.md

@@ -22,13 +22,13 @@ You can translate this in an active form. AT: "It was also for our benefit, beca
 
 "Raised" here is an idiom for "caused to live again" AT: "him who caused Jesus our Lord to live again from the dead ones"  (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]])
 
-# This is the one who was delivered up for our trespasses
+# who was delivered up
 
-You can translate this in an active form. AT: "This is the one whom God brought to those who killed him, so he may pay the penalty for our sins" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
+You can translate this in an active form. AT: "whom God delivered up" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
-# delivered
+# delivered up
 
-"brought"
+"given to those who wanted to harm him"
 
 # was raised for our justification
 

rut/01/14.md

@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 
 This means that they cried out loud or wept bitterly. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]])
 
-# Listen
+# Listen, your sister-in-law
 
-"What I am about to say is important"
+"Pay attention, because what I am about to say is both true and important, your sister-in-law"
 
 # Ruth held on to her
 

sng/01/15.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# Listen
+# Listen, you
 
-"Listen carefully" or "What I am about to say is important." You could use a word in your language that tells the hearer to listen carefully.
+"Pay attention, because what I am about to say is both true and important: you"
 
 # my love
 

sng/01/16.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# Listen
+# Listen, you
 
-"Listen carefully" or "What I am about to say is important." You could use a word in your language that tells the hearer to listen carefully.
+"Pay attention, because what I am about to say is both true and important: you"
 
 # handsome
 

tit/03/09.md

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ This is the study of family kinship relationships.
 
 # strife
 
-"quarreling"
+arguments or fights
 
 # the law