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 # David killed
 
-Here David represents himself and his soldiers. Alternate translation: "David and his soldiers killed" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]])
+Here "David" is a synecdoche for himself and his soldiers. Alternate translation: "David and his soldiers killed" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]])
 
 # seven hundred ... forty thousand
 
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Here David represents himself and his soldiers. Alternate translation: "David an
 
 This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "The Israelites wounded Shobak the commander of the Aramean army, and he died there" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
-# Shobak ... Hadarezer
+# Shobak
 
-See how you translated these men's names in [2 Samuel 10:16](../10/16.md).
+See how you translated this man's name in [2 Samuel 10:16](../10/16.md).