This can be stated in active form. AT: "So Hamor and Shechem had someone circumcise all the men" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
"third" is the ordinal number for three. It can be stated without the ordinal number. AT: "After two days" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]])
Here "edge" stands for the blade of the sword. AT: "with the blade of their swords" or "with their swords" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]])