Here "glory" represents Yahweh's presence. AT: "Yahweh showed all the people the glory of his presence" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
# Fire came out from Yahweh and consumed
"Yahweh sent a fire that consumed"
# consumed the burnt offering
The fire completely burning up the offering is spoken of as if the fire consumed or used up the burnt offering. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])