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 \v 1 Then Yahweh spoke to Moses. He said,
 \v 2 "Speak to the people of Israel and say to them, 'When you go into the land where you will live, which Yahweh will give to you,
-\v 3 you are to prepare an offering by fire to him, either a burnt offering or a sacrifice to fulfill a vow or a freewill offering, or an offering at your feasts, to produce a sweet aroma for Yahweh from the herd or the flock.
+\v 3 you are to prepare an offering by fire to Yahweh, either a burnt offering or a sacrifice to fulfill a vow or a freewill offering, or an offering at your feasts, to produce a pleasing aroma for Yahweh from the herd or the flock.
  
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-\v 4 Then the one who brings his offering must prepare a sacrifice and offer to Yahweh a grain offering of a tenth of an ephah of fine flour, mixed with one-fourth of a hin of oil.
+\v 4 You must offer to Yahweh a burnt offering as well as a grain offering of a tenth of an ephah of fine flour mixed with one-fourth of a hin of oil.
 \v 5 You must also offer with the burnt offering, or for the sacrifice, one-fourth of a hin of wine for the drink offering for each lamb.
 
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