Tom Warren
9e26a5192a
must is correct
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though, "will" can have a sense of command. Must is clearer.
2016-07-11 14:28:46 -04:00
Tom Warren
3e2330f69b
must to will
2016-07-06 04:00:27 -04:00
59346e8772
Update 18.usfm
2016-07-05 13:12:08 -04:00
95047182f6
Mt. 18:8 cut out extra comma
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Mt. 18:8 cut out extra comma
2016-07-05 13:11:30 -04:00
3763268f2f
Mt 17:27 change "lest"
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Mt 17:27 change "lest" to "But so that we do not cause..."
2016-07-05 13:10:39 -04:00
9928d4692d
Mt 17:24 added hyphens in "half-shekel"
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Mt 17:24 added hyphens in "half-shekel"
2016-07-05 13:06:50 -04:00
Tom Warren
dbbb6002af
Continuity in Temptation
2016-07-04 23:12:45 -04:00
bb1353eef2
Mt 28:16 de-capitalize "the Eleven"
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Mt 28:16 de-capitalize "the Eleven" since I can't find any reason to do so. This is not in any English version (fifteen of them) and does not serve a title or name of the group.
2016-07-01 18:55:05 -04:00
0457184a00
Matthew 23:26 change punctuation
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Matthew 23:26 change punctuation to make two sentences (replace comma with exclamation mark and capitalize "Clean." The change in number from the ordinary plural "Pharisees" to singular here is confusing without this.
2016-07-01 13:06:55 -04:00
2922ecdc3e
Matt 20:22 change which to that
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Matt 20:22 change which to that
2016-06-28 21:24:08 -04:00
25bb02c150
Update 20.usfm
2016-06-28 15:11:56 -04:00
2960bfe6a2
Update 20.usfm
2016-06-28 14:55:44 -04:00
f9fff63932
Update 20.usfm
2016-06-28 14:55:03 -04:00
232c8304e9
Update 20.usfm
2016-06-28 14:54:16 -04:00
38224ef900
Update 20.usfm
2016-06-28 14:53:41 -04:00
04ba4edcf9
Update 20.usfm
2016-06-28 14:52:40 -04:00
dd6d8e0b82
Update 20.usfm
2016-06-28 14:52:00 -04:00
46d2df76f8
Matthew 20:16 footnote unclear
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Matthew 20:16 footnote unclear because the reader does not know where this quote was omitted from. Added the final clause.
2016-06-28 14:51:18 -04:00
e6235bf2df
Update 20.usfm
2016-06-28 12:15:36 -04:00
71022aa47d
Update 06.usfm
2016-06-28 12:08:59 -04:00
394f0cf8cf
Update 05.usfm
2016-06-28 12:06:53 -04:00
5a88746e72
Matthew 18:3 change "repent" to "turn"
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Matthew 18:3 change "repent" to "turn." The original uses only the word for turn. Repent is derived from this and limits the concept to a mental process. What Jesus means is a more of a life-style and attitude change, is stated implicitly and should not be limited.
2016-06-28 08:15:06 -04:00
Tom Warren
1971bb775b
eleven to Eleven
2016-06-28 00:20:28 -04:00
Tom Warren
7aec49a7e8
trouble changed to evil kakia
2016-06-26 04:59:50 -04:00
Tom Warren
cd89a7fdd3
garments to cloaks
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because garments is too general
2016-06-26 04:34:55 -04:00
Tom Warren
f2e8c74e71
garments to cloaks
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not just any clothes, but the outer cloak
2016-06-26 04:23:06 -04:00
Tom Warren
36128f3ac9
Imperfect verb
2016-06-26 04:08:16 -04:00
Tom Warren
0fa4eb5ed0
Matt 7:9
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Rewrite for clarity
2016-06-26 01:12:07 -04:00
Tom Warren
f079466826
Addenda
2016-06-25 03:47:08 -04:00
Tom Warren
c90c7f247e
Matt changes
2016-06-25 00:14:35 -04:00
Tom Warren
8e83dff498
Various
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consistency in names potter's field not Potter's field, and the like
2016-06-24 20:38:20 -04:00
Tom Warren
f63061a763
Wrestling again with quotes
2016-06-24 19:18:38 -04:00
Tom Warren
2d24bf7f79
Reader report on Matt
2016-06-24 11:03:01 -04:00
Tom Warren
06007157fd
space before quotation removed
2016-06-24 08:55:41 -04:00
7d42449a6d
Update 26.usfm
2016-06-23 10:35:44 -04:00
1ec35dc92c
Update 10.usfm
2016-06-22 14:23:41 -04:00
a46f508d30
Update 04.usfm
2016-06-22 14:21:18 -04:00
c851d4e24b
Update 21.usfm
2016-06-22 07:56:08 -04:00
Tom Warren
7d9b841d1d
changes
2016-06-22 00:21:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
835b4dd48d
Spurious comma 20:1
2016-06-17 08:53:11 -04:00
2f0a29ced1
Update 27.usfm
2016-06-16 16:11:13 -04:00
5891533e49
Update 06.usfm
2016-06-16 15:50:08 -04:00
Tom Warren
c94a7b01f3
chunk navigation
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"he who made them" was quoted before the quote, and had to be added
after the chunk for clarity that Jesus was quoting the OT (God) and not
speaking something new of himself.
2016-06-16 08:46:40 -04:00
Tom Warren
ca32e7e490
from the dead
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to
from the dead ones
2016-06-15 14:56:39 -04:00
Tom Warren
e999865e0c
Not Nor, but Or
2016-06-10 14:58:56 -04:00
Tom Warren
25be317946
forgiven men
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not forgive to men
2016-06-10 14:56:17 -04:00
Tom Warren
324431d05b
26:51
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corrected were to "was with Jesus"
2016-06-05 18:19:53 -04:00
Tom Warren
69c9b03f8c
punctuation
2016-06-03 12:46:22 -04:00
7879be1bba
Matthew 27:54 change "that" to "who"
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Matthew 27:54 change "that" to "who" in "the centurion and those who were watching"
2016-06-03 12:13:48 -04:00
34da70aa9e
Matthew 9:23 eliminate "were"
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Matthew 9:23 eliminate "were" in "the crowds __ making much noise." This is better English and the Greek structure as well.
2016-06-03 12:12:05 -04:00
b4bbd203d6
Matthew 7:16 eliminate comma
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Matthew 7:16 eliminate comma after "from a thornbush"
2016-06-03 12:07:03 -04:00
52993daf02
Matthew 6:26 change "nor" to "or"
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Matthew 6:26 change "nor" to "or" in "They do not sow or reap _or gather..."
2016-06-03 12:05:16 -04:00
d6d9b624ad
Matthew 5:29 & 30 eliminate commas
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Matthew 5:29 & 30 eliminate commas after "perish" in both verses.
2016-06-03 12:03:36 -04:00
da4a7f3d6c
V14, 47 Twelve
2016-05-31 17:51:55 -04:00
950fd9db0a
V27 the Twelve
2016-05-31 17:50:54 -04:00
Tom Warren
3800968d75
Sea of Galilee
2016-05-28 16:00:52 -04:00
Tom Warren
ea0138f27d
quotes
2016-05-26 18:26:56 -04:00
Tom Warren
a6a4bb10cc
quotation tangle
2016-05-26 18:16:45 -04:00
Tom Warren
65c93dc996
change
2016-05-26 11:03:09 -04:00
Tom Warren
8efff013c1
assorts
2016-05-26 11:01:09 -04:00
Tom Warren
5b873c2dba
end of chapts
2016-05-26 10:53:44 -04:00
Tom Warren
6139b7bd98
recognize them
2016-05-26 10:52:40 -04:00
Tom Warren
ee01e591dd
bear to produce
2016-05-26 10:51:12 -04:00
Tom Warren
5096f8cf25
reworked some sections end of chapt
2016-05-26 10:40:41 -04:00
Tom Warren
c39abb9852
Clothes we will wear
2016-05-26 10:34:25 -04:00
Tom Warren
5b7eb91bd5
more valuable
2016-05-26 10:31:42 -04:00
Tom Warren
0e52207200
punctuation
2016-05-26 10:29:27 -04:00
Tom Warren
159a38dceb
consume
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to "destroy"
2016-05-26 10:26:36 -04:00
Tom Warren
ea4de1c307
private to secret
2016-05-26 10:21:42 -04:00
Tom Warren
12b6b193ca
Closer to the Greek
2016-05-26 10:19:03 -04:00
Tom Warren
4c88befe53
Straightened out Lord's Prayer
2016-05-26 10:14:42 -04:00
Tom Warren
f2f071ac60
Vs 4, 6
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recompense changed to "reward"
2016-05-26 10:11:38 -04:00
Tom Warren
94bb3d1e30
Condition
2016-05-26 10:09:17 -04:00
Tom Warren
e6823e56e2
Various tweeks
2016-05-26 09:59:31 -04:00
Tom Warren
a15df6137a
Various edits
2016-05-26 09:45:07 -04:00
Tom Warren
0941298eda
oxen and fattened ...
2016-05-26 08:27:39 -04:00
Tom Warren
4ba4abafb9
Reworked 22:1
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Redundant introduction of narrative is simplified.
2016-05-26 08:21:27 -04:00
Tom Warren
cfebe926b6
21:43
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removed unnecessary UC"The...", replaced with "the ...
2016-05-26 08:16:16 -04:00
Tom Warren
2b1a11abef
Subject changed
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21:41 from "people" to "they" following the Gk text.
2016-05-24 17:01:02 -04:00
fbe33f1648
Exclamation mark replaces period
2016-05-24 10:18:07 -05:00
Tom Warren
daf71e7d52
formatting
2016-05-24 07:37:18 -04:00
Tom Warren
d57f829a8f
unimportant to "little"
2016-05-24 07:36:37 -04:00
Tom Warren
25323c665e
further to farther
2016-05-23 11:36:36 -04:00
Tom Warren
f5d8c8d17c
vs 39
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reworded
2016-05-23 11:32:57 -04:00
Tom Warren
35fe194799
Whoever
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should be whoever
2016-05-21 14:58:09 -04:00
Tom Warren
86b108e012
moving the mountain
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Clarifying the verbs
2016-05-21 14:42:56 -04:00
Tom Warren
9335da00cc
Who do you say that I am
2016-05-21 14:29:58 -04:00
Tom Warren
bbfe0f85b8
heaven to sky
2016-05-21 14:27:20 -04:00
Tom Warren
a0d458549b
sky not heaven
2016-05-21 14:27:20 -04:00
447c0e852c
V19 come, follow me
2016-05-19 15:44:08 -04:00
d8834ba117
V11 in Galilee
2016-05-19 14:27:27 -04:00
47035b2941
V32 rewrite
2016-05-19 12:54:06 -04:00
f64850f19d
V2 punctuation
2016-05-19 12:23:10 -04:00
9e97ee3f79
V24, 25 punctuation
2016-05-19 12:01:08 -04:00
ab467d9e78
V10 dried-up
2016-05-19 11:47:08 -04:00
9d0208d79b
V10, 23 commas
2016-05-19 11:11:19 -04:00
da7ac3ce64
V16 delete comma
2016-05-19 11:09:08 -04:00
e416b03b3c
V12 who lived before you
2016-05-19 11:01:00 -04:00
c5f8d6206e
V6 Jordan River
2016-05-19 10:56:30 -04:00
c448940cbb
V18, 19 added commas
2016-05-19 10:49:10 -04:00
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